Burn

[Friskey™]

Burn

I see you falling down again
I won’t pick you up again
Because I see you with your mentor
Trying to make it a living hell
And you’re driving me crazy
I'm screaming my guts out
You’re hearing my every word
When I say this clearly

Where will you be?
When the end of the world comes
So stop playing these mind games with me
You’re hurting me more
The heartache won’t go away
The sickness your life’s for
So go burn somewhere else

Because I'm tired of your crying
You’re not crying on my shoulder anymore
You lost my trust
You lost my love
I want to forget you
Erase you from my mind

I'm sick and tired
Of your stupid games
Your helpless lies
And your stupid differences
You’re hearing my every word
And I hope you hear this clearly
So go burn somewhere else

[.in.the.shadows.]

Wow... there's some SERIOUS emotion there. That's really good. I've read your other stuff too, it's all really great. Have you ever considered maybe publishing your stuff?

[Messy Marj]

That's awesome. Indeed, maybe you should consider about publishing your work. From what I've read now of your work, it's all good.

[Graphicfoot]

wow!that was indeed a very emotional poem ...as the previous two people said and i will agree that your literary work is really good and you may start publishing your work
keep on writing.You have the support of the lpa members! :)

[lpsk8er]

I've read some of your other stuff but I really think you did an excellent job on this one.

[a life in ashes]

E.M.O.T.I.O.N-i like it, i like it alot, its well done.

[Hybrid Meteora]

GOOD work! I agree with all the others!

[XoX-Jelly_Bean-XoX]

Man Your Good! Where do you get your ideas??

[sickcycle]

This was nice, reminds me of my ex-girlfriend and myself, good job! :thumbsup:

[Friskey™]

Originally posted by sickcycle@Mar 11 2005, 11:42 AM
This was nice, reminds me of my ex-girlfriend and myself, good job! :thumbsup:
Your not the only one :lol:

Thanks for the comments BTW! :)