No Longer need you

[a life in ashes]

No Longer Need You

I'm so tired of all your lies,
The things you put me through,all the hate inside,
You say that your my friend,
But with your words,you bring me down,

Why don't you just get away,
Leave me alone,i'm not o.k,
Just shut right up,
I no longer need you,

I've benefitted from none of this,
The moment i'm happy,
You get rid of it,
What can I do,
to make it right?

Why don't you just get away,
Leave me alone,i'm not o.k,
Just shut right up,
I no longer need you,

The angers taking over,
It's consuming me, (repeat x4)

Why don't you just get away,
Leave me alone,i'm not o.k,
Just shut right up,
I no longer need you.

[Arhaz]

short...can get more lines...can be more complicated...but i bet it rox when you put a beat to it!
good work on the whole... ^_^

[a life in ashes]

indeed-think one step closer-its short and simple but when you put some big riffs onto it its great

[Arhaz]

damn it freaky!!!!
one step closer is exactly what i was thinking about...hell ya...that was a freaky coincidence!

[lpsk8er]

I agree, it's short and I think you should add more lines though it sounds good.