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a life in ashes
02-10-2005, 02:31 PM
Shut Up,Shut Up

We once were friends,
But now we fight,
It's not too late to apologise,
If we fight you will lose,
It's time to choose,

Shut up,Shut up,
No-one cares,
Fighting face to face,
You wouldn't dare,
Right now you'll bleed,

What a shock,
You're lost and cold,
The insults you throw out,
They're so damn old,
The apathy we have,
When you lose i'll laugh,

Shut up,Shut up,
No-one cares,
Fighting face to face,
You wouldn't dare,
Right now you'll bleed

Stand and fight,
Or get outta here,

Shut up,Shut up,
No-one cares,
Fighting face to face,
You wouldn't dare,
Right now you'll bleed

Right now you'll bleed,
So say goodbye...

Written in memory of my friend for two years and who now hates my guts, for no reason at all.

Arhaz
02-10-2005, 05:08 PM
i'd say..better...can still be complicated..got a touch of nu metal, i like it...and i feel i'm mutating into Simon...
what the hell!? i'm not brilliant myself!
good stuff!

lpsk8er
02-11-2005, 01:32 AM
It sounds good. Nice job

lofton0788
02-11-2005, 01:55 AM
a little awkward structure but good never-the-less