RiffRockerX
02-09-2005, 06:32 PM
I have about 13 or 14 poems that are copyrighted at poetry.com but i've decided to share a few with everyone here. I will choose some of my best and see what you all think. Here goes.
"The Sun is Fast Asleep"
Wandering on this moonlight trail.
The stars play games in the sky.
With swift back and forth movements.
The moon stands proudly on his darkened canvas.
The Sun is fast asleep, awaiting the coming dawn.
Still I hear the silent, melliflous ballad.
Of your voice, so rich with heart.
The shades of dark and light seem to resemble your face.
Now i contemplate of you, my heart's desire.
Fueling my imagination are the endless fields of luminance.
Across the painted horizon peeks the thought of day.
But for now the sun is fast asleep.
"Dearly Beloved"
Dearly beloved, I'll write to you today
To tell you of my lifetime of fearing what you'll say
A heart of endless wonders, a mind of endless depth
If only i knew what was right i'd make the steady step
To live my life all over, to make the slightest change
Would never be the same dear, would never be the same
Dearly beloved, I'll write to you this year
To warn you of the dangers, to save you from your fears
Keep me in your mind when this useless fight is dead
I'll ask you of your journeys and live these days ahead
Take the upper hand now, I'll leave the choice to choose
Let me be the good guy, I'll never let you lose
Confusion bites the heels, of everyone indeed
But never let it grow there, for all it brings is greed
Dearly beloved, I wanted you to know
I cant go on this way, I have to let it show
Before my heart has changed and before my mind is swayed
I must cast off this burden that I myself have laid
"Yesterday's Gone"
Eyes closed tight, Ears held closed
Evil in your mind, imposed
Steering you in paths astray
This can't wait another day
I won't let you let me down
Take my hand and you won't drown
I'll be here just look my way
Pretend It's just like yesterday
I can see it in your eyes
Hidden under your dark disguise
Shed the black and embrace the light
Let this go and end the fight
If you have any feedback then please post, I would appreciate it greatly. Thanks
"The Sun is Fast Asleep"
Wandering on this moonlight trail.
The stars play games in the sky.
With swift back and forth movements.
The moon stands proudly on his darkened canvas.
The Sun is fast asleep, awaiting the coming dawn.
Still I hear the silent, melliflous ballad.
Of your voice, so rich with heart.
The shades of dark and light seem to resemble your face.
Now i contemplate of you, my heart's desire.
Fueling my imagination are the endless fields of luminance.
Across the painted horizon peeks the thought of day.
But for now the sun is fast asleep.
"Dearly Beloved"
Dearly beloved, I'll write to you today
To tell you of my lifetime of fearing what you'll say
A heart of endless wonders, a mind of endless depth
If only i knew what was right i'd make the steady step
To live my life all over, to make the slightest change
Would never be the same dear, would never be the same
Dearly beloved, I'll write to you this year
To warn you of the dangers, to save you from your fears
Keep me in your mind when this useless fight is dead
I'll ask you of your journeys and live these days ahead
Take the upper hand now, I'll leave the choice to choose
Let me be the good guy, I'll never let you lose
Confusion bites the heels, of everyone indeed
But never let it grow there, for all it brings is greed
Dearly beloved, I wanted you to know
I cant go on this way, I have to let it show
Before my heart has changed and before my mind is swayed
I must cast off this burden that I myself have laid
"Yesterday's Gone"
Eyes closed tight, Ears held closed
Evil in your mind, imposed
Steering you in paths astray
This can't wait another day
I won't let you let me down
Take my hand and you won't drown
I'll be here just look my way
Pretend It's just like yesterday
I can see it in your eyes
Hidden under your dark disguise
Shed the black and embrace the light
Let this go and end the fight
If you have any feedback then please post, I would appreciate it greatly. Thanks