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Vampire
11-18-2004, 08:03 PM
Our Love Will Never Die

Row, row, row my boat
Gently out to sea
You want me to try to be on my own
But I find myself rowing back to thee

I can’t pinpoint my location
What exactly is my next destination?
You were my navigator
Now I’m lost

I can’t get past icebergs of memories
That I fear will melt over time
Will I hit too many and finally collide?
If I drown in them, will you save my life?

Our relationship is out there somewhere
A massive mountain in the sea
After all our storms and tribulations
My hope is the mountain stays standing

We keep saying goodbye
Because I’m afraid to try
Without you as my lifejacket to keep me secure
New waters scare me unlike familiar shores

You’re out there exploring new horizons
As I remain stranded and pondering
The sunset burns my eyes
Your love is always haunting me

When I look into your eyes
My perseverance grows inside
Because I feel our boats will collide
And we’ll build a ship for our love to reside

We can sail the seas as one once more
I’ll be waiting sunken on the ocean’s floor
And you can find the treasure that was once yours
And that is our love that will forever endure
x3r09
11-19-2004, 01:49 AM
that is really good...wow! (w00t)
Friskey™
11-19-2004, 01:51 AM
Really interesting!
Vampire
11-19-2004, 12:33 PM
I'm glad the two of you enjoyed my piece. Thank you.
jmj
11-19-2004, 02:56 PM
two words Bad @ss these lyrics work great as either singing or rapping lyrics. I rapped them to Step Up's beat just for fun. There great I'd give them a 9.9 if they were being rated.
Vampire
11-19-2004, 10:10 PM
Originally posted by jmj@Nov 19 2004, 06:56 AM
two words Bad @ss these lyrics work great as either singing or rapping lyrics. I rapped them to Step Up's beat just for fun. There great I'd give them a 9.9 if they were being rated.
Wow, I never had someone tell me they were great rap lyrics, haha. Thanks a lot for your comments. ^_^
Jamie
11-19-2004, 10:12 PM
Really interesting and different, well done mate
Vampire
11-19-2004, 10:17 PM
Originally posted by Jamie@Nov 19 2004, 02:12 PM
Really interesting and different, well done mate
I appreciate your comment. Thank you.
Jamie
11-20-2004, 12:06 AM
No problem :) and do please post some more
Vampire
11-20-2004, 01:35 AM
Originally posted by Jamie@Nov 19 2004, 04:06 PM
No problem :) and do please post some more
I'll post a new piece within this hour. Be on the lookout! :)