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Friskey™
11-18-2004, 03:20 PM
End of the World

Self-destruction is all I need
Because I feel so lost without you
It sucks that I'm here
Don’t you see the scar on my eye?
I know that you’ll be gone
Forever

The end of the world is coming
And your not here to save me
You can blow your knee out once
But you can’t love me twice
Third time’s the charm?
Never

Can you be so insincere?
Don’t you ever open your mouth again?

You can take your broken words
That you don’t see
I need to break my head in
You can take your lies
That you don’t know
You need to break your head in.

Vampire
11-18-2004, 09:27 PM
It was okay. I love "the end of of the world is coming and you're not here to save me."

I didn't understand this question though: "Don’t you ever open your mouth again?"

The line: "It sucks that I'm here" strikes me as odd because suddenly it sounds like really bad dialogue.

Friskey™
11-18-2004, 10:55 PM
The line "Don’t you ever open your mouth again?" is not supposed to be a question...I think I pushed the wrong key when typing this or something

And BTW, when I wrote this, I was listening to 18 Visions at the time, so thats what it struck me as

x3r09
11-19-2004, 01:34 AM
not bad...

but to me it seemed a little random, like it had no sense behind it

but then again, not bad :D

Friskey™
11-19-2004, 01:46 AM
It's supposed to be about my ex!