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Vampire
11-18-2004, 07:14 AM
Suffocation

Though they are severed
Don’t touch the wounds please
This might sound strange
But I want to let them bleed
So I peel away the scabs
And set the pain free
Letting the fresh blood
Spew all over me

Give me your gentle hands
Wrap them around my throat
Squeeze with all your might
Scream and never let go
Get a firmer grip
As my life slowly goes
Flying by in my eyes
And I start to choke

I thought of all the ways that I could die
And realized
The worst is being without you
By my side
But in the end
It’s as if your venom is my friend
The way you tell me it’s over
Cuts and chokes me in a blend

Let my heart spill the blood
That has your virus
It’s a pain that kills me
But I sort of like it
The tears that are on the verge
Of streaming down my face
Taste of unstableness
When they flow posthaste

Take two shovels
And bury us in our graves
Take two broken hearts
And watch them survive
Amazed
Because our blood
Intertwined
Will never die
Will never lose
Like aged wine

x3r09
11-19-2004, 02:23 AM
how do some people write so good?! (w00t)

Vampire
11-19-2004, 12:26 PM
Originally posted by x3r09@Nov 18 2004, 06:23 PM
how do some people write so good?! (w00t)
The quickest and honest answer I have to that is: experience. In this situation: heartbreak.

Friskey™
11-20-2004, 01:24 AM
well its really nice!

Vampire
11-20-2004, 01:28 AM
Originally posted by Twitch Fiorentino@Nov 19 2004, 05:24 PM
well its really nice!
Thank you so much.

Jamie
11-21-2004, 11:26 AM
Pretty cool man

Vampire
11-21-2004, 11:45 AM
Originally posted by Jamie@Nov 21 2004, 03:26 AM
Pretty cool man
Thank you very much.