jmj
11-17-2004, 03:13 PM
I play bass in an NERD/LP style band and I do vocals and I was wondering what you guys thought of these lyrics. They are the rough draft so they will change
Boiling Point
The task at hand is us
Drawn together, then pushed away
At the same I beg to stay
I don'nt know what I'm saying or what
I just want to get close enought to feel
whisper(What I thought was real)
(Chorus:Screaming/Singing)
Take me back to a place
I know so well
When I could tell
I'm at the Point of No Return
This is just another lesson learned
Stop me from doing whatever brought us together
And what pushed you away
(keep your Distance)I'd watch you through a looking glass
I'd sit back/While time will pass
I wish I could step back to the time I was sane
Instead breaking my back to know your name
But I've reached a point where
Take one step back
Cause you cannot Stay
Bridge
Don't take me away from myself
Just want to be with
But I need find myself
Not the one you
But the one I am
Gave you my shoulder to catch your tears
But you destroyed it can became my fears
(Chorus:Screaming/Singing)
Take me back to a place
I know so well
When I could tell
I'm at the Point of No Return
This is just another lesson learned
Get away From Me
Love in E Minor
Sitting on the edge of my bed
Just woke up (And I can Feel You)
Put shoes on and I'm out
I'm starring at my phone(And I can hear you)
Everywhere I turn your there (And I can't get enough)
I'm yours (but I can't have you)
Or maybe I can
Chorus
Maybe we should give in
And our love try
We've come to the point where it's time to fly or Die
So here we are in the same place
It doesn't feel so bad
I make an approach(cause I can see you)
You flash a smile
I spill my drink(Damn I am near you)
Chorus & Bridge
Maybe we should give in
And give our love try
We've come to the point where it's time to fly or Die
Euphoria sets in looking to my left
You appear standing there
I don't if it's real or a hallucination
But you are here and there no time for conversation
Just lose control and give in to emotions
Ending
I wake and I'm slightly in a daze
I feel your breath on me....
Boiling Point
The task at hand is us
Drawn together, then pushed away
At the same I beg to stay
I don'nt know what I'm saying or what
I just want to get close enought to feel
whisper(What I thought was real)
(Chorus:Screaming/Singing)
Take me back to a place
I know so well
When I could tell
I'm at the Point of No Return
This is just another lesson learned
Stop me from doing whatever brought us together
And what pushed you away
(keep your Distance)I'd watch you through a looking glass
I'd sit back/While time will pass
I wish I could step back to the time I was sane
Instead breaking my back to know your name
But I've reached a point where
Take one step back
Cause you cannot Stay
Bridge
Don't take me away from myself
Just want to be with
But I need find myself
Not the one you
But the one I am
Gave you my shoulder to catch your tears
But you destroyed it can became my fears
(Chorus:Screaming/Singing)
Take me back to a place
I know so well
When I could tell
I'm at the Point of No Return
This is just another lesson learned
Get away From Me
Love in E Minor
Sitting on the edge of my bed
Just woke up (And I can Feel You)
Put shoes on and I'm out
I'm starring at my phone(And I can hear you)
Everywhere I turn your there (And I can't get enough)
I'm yours (but I can't have you)
Or maybe I can
Chorus
Maybe we should give in
And our love try
We've come to the point where it's time to fly or Die
So here we are in the same place
It doesn't feel so bad
I make an approach(cause I can see you)
You flash a smile
I spill my drink(Damn I am near you)
Chorus & Bridge
Maybe we should give in
And give our love try
We've come to the point where it's time to fly or Die
Euphoria sets in looking to my left
You appear standing there
I don't if it's real or a hallucination
But you are here and there no time for conversation
Just lose control and give in to emotions
Ending
I wake and I'm slightly in a daze
I feel your breath on me....