Weak Skills

[LigerZeroShneider]

[Final]

I stand here by my mic
Spitting out verse after verse
Winning every battle I’m in
Cuz they don’t know when I strike
I call it a gift some call it a curse
My mouth just goes off
Once the record starts to spin

Sometimes I can’t be contained
Ain’t nobody can trained
For my rapid verses
So fast
It’s like a bullet blast
That can’t be surpassed

[chorus]
Your weak skills will never improve
While you don’t have anything to prove
I dare you to come back and battle me again
And each try will end in vain

This is my style
I’m so versatile
Rapping freestyle
My rhymes are so hostile

[chorus]

I’m a natural at this
With a huge rhyme vocabulary
And I know how to reminisce
I can get you weary
Slowing down your rhymes
Causing you to overuse sometimes

Over and over my rhymes has flow
Causing you to show
Your incapability skill
And you’ll never learn it until
You master the rhymes

[chorus]

Over and Over
Your verses sound the same
In the end you got nobody to blame
But yourself
For not improving your rhyme
Time after time.

[Dark Knight]

:mike: it's pretty good so far, keep at it, hope it ends as good as it starts

[LigerZeroShneider]

Thanks for that comment. I added chorus, and 2 more verses. I'm nicknamed Lyrical Mike for a reason.

[Dark Knight]

Lyrical Mike huh, can't argue with that, you're flow is on point man :mike:
how long did it take you to write this, and what drives you to write?

[LigerZeroShneider]

To write.... 30 minutes with a few breaks here and there. Um... my life basically, I like writing to get out ideas and stuff.

[saunderitos]

that was awesum
even though i hate rap it was good.
you could get a few better rhymes (cant be bothered to quote sorry)
but id say 9/10

[LigerZeroShneider]

Yeah, it kinda hard to get rhymes to fit to the flow I'm rewriting parts here and there when I over read it.

[Razan]

It's amazing I like it alot.

BTW Limp Bizkit did something like this too but Mike's (both) way better.
It's called: "Gimme the mic".
Take it as a compliment if I say you're better than Fred Durst no offence to the people who like him ;)

I call it a gift some call it a curse

I espicially like that line did you make it up because umm....I think I heard this somewhere before can't remember where but I'm sure I heard it.

[LigerZeroShneider]

I think I might have heard it before too, when you listen to music some lines just get sucked in to you. I think it was Jay-Z, he did have an album called the Gift and the Curse

[x3r09]

i was just thinking when you said:

" Sometimes I can’t be contained
Ain’t nobody can trained
For my rapid verses
So fast
It’s like a bullet blast
That can’t be surpassed"

that stood out to me as like something that twista would rap about.

yeah it's good! :D

[LigerZeroShneider]

Yup, my mouth is pretty quick. Sometimes to quick...