Every Me....Every You

[Jamie]

This was wrote by the singer of my band, she doesn't know I've posted this.....She just had some random lines, and I fitted it together and wrote the second verse and part of the bridge
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I feel so empty
There's nothing left inside me
Why do I feel alone?
Like no one knows I exist
So why do you stand by me?
When I told you I loved him
Words don't mean a thing to me
Your always going to be everything I ever wanted
Everything I'll ever need
You've had your one last chance
But you let go

The bloodstains on your sleaves
The crystal tears down your cheek
You stole me, I'm incomplete
Every me, and every you

My heart bleeds for you
You make the simple things go away
The long lonely path to the end
Tumbleweeds roll by
The same way that you walked away from me
I close my eyes, your smile is burnt on my memory
You still act like I don't exist
So why do you stand by me?
When I told you I loved him
Words don't mean a thing to me
Your always going to be everything I ever wanted
Everything I'll ever need
You've had your one last chance
But you let go

The bloodstains on your sleaves
The crystal tears down your cheek
You stole me, I'm incomplete
Every me, and every you

I
Just want to walk away with you
Why?
So we can be happy together
Said I
To the simple things you say to me

The bloodstains on your sleaves
The crystal tears down your cheek
You stole me, I'm incomplete
Every me, and every you
The bloodstains on your sleaves
The crystal tears down your cheek
You stole me, I'm incomplete
Every me, and every you

[Ppr:Kut]

:mellow:

[Jamie]

Is that a good :mellow: ...or a bad :mellow: ?

[Razan]

I like it alot I acctually love it if you have a sample I would love to hear it on "Kick Back:Cafe We Want To Hear You".

Lyrics are amazing....
but it sounds too metaphoric which is cool in my opinion (makes you think) but some people don't like to think and assume you're just putting words that sound cool and smart together.

That's when the voice comes in. If the voice has no emotion then there's a problem..you have to feel "empty like there's nothing left inside you" when you sing to make it sound good or real.

Wow I sound like a critic :mellow:
What I mean to say is it sounds great so far.
Is it an official band or is it just fun?? Either way it's working.
Good Luck :D

[Jamie]

Thanks Spiked...and yes it is an officail band...well..kinda...its for fun, but we want to play gigs from it...and maybe get somewhere if we're good enough.

[Dedicated]

Godly! I love it! :o



I especially like the chorus and bridge! :D

[Jamie]

I know I am...and thanks about the song ;)

[Razan]

I know I replied but....ummmm..scary I just read it again and I love it even more!!!
It's amazing please keep me posted on the progress.
It's really really good. (w00t)

[Jamie]

Thanks again Spiked...

[the_chemist]

It's great.
It's GREAT.

[Jamie]

cheers th_dspatchr