My Rap Song

[[Darken Hybrid]]

yea, back for the first time
tryin' to make this rhyme
one of the greaters rhymes
introducing some pride
not to make you cry
not to make you blind
but to realize that u've been livin' a lie
release your inner side and be alive
we all know that we hate spy
it doesn't matter, we just gotta try
Im here to make you realize
be happy and dont wave good bye

yo, i'm no nas
no, i'm no ja'
you gotta take it all back

let's keep up the game
all the same,
assumed the name
when you are trying to copy somebody else
they're gonna be in flame
just like you being ashame in 15 minutes of fame
these rhymes were inspired by Linkin Park
just like being in the dark with a big question mark
who's the one that's gonna make the big scratch?

Yea, we got O to the L B I N
dat's the name
just do it again & again
dont try to be afraid
'coz then you are gonna be all ashamed
u gotta loose yourself man
then no respect is gained

you people so phony
I think y'all too corny
gotta hit it big to make some money
gotta be independet like da bunny



so wat do u guys think? most of the song was inspired by mike's rapping. :mike:

[Hybrid Soldier]

hmmm...its okay. the beginning was awesome but i seemed to lose the beat after. good work though. :)

[Todd]

how were they inspired by Mike???

He's never used crap like "Yea, we got O to the L B I N"

and he's never used made up words like:
"yo, i'm no nas
no, i'm no ja'"

you should change it to inspired by puff daddy or something. Saying that LP inspired you is an insult to them

[tkd_rap]

the first part was good, but "Got to be independent like da bunny" yeah, ok then

[Mark]

Originally posted by Todd@Feb 15 2003, 02:53 PM
how were they inspired by Mike???

He's never used crap like "Yea, we got O to the L B I N"

and he's never used made up words like:
"yo, i'm no nas
no, i'm no ja'"

you should change it to inspired by puff daddy or something. Saying that LP inspired you is an insult to them
lmao, we have our own version of Simon Cowell on the LPA forums. :P.

[Todd]

Originally posted by LPFAN05+Feb 15 2003, 10:18 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (LPFAN05 @ Feb 15 2003, 10:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--Todd@Feb 15 2003, 02:53 PM
how were they inspired by Mike???

He&#39;s never used crap like "Yea, we got O to the L B I N"

and he&#39;s never used made up words like:
"yo, i&#39;m no nas
no, i&#39;m no ja&#39;"

you should change it to inspired by puff daddy or something. Saying that LP inspired you is an insult to them
lmao, we have our own version of Simon Cowell on the LPA forums. :P. [/b][/quote]
who&#39;s he?

[Will]

Originally posted by Todd+Feb 16 2003, 12:04 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Todd @ Feb 16 2003, 12:04 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by -LPFAN05@Feb 15 2003, 10:18 PM
<!--QuoteBegin--Todd@Feb 15 2003, 02:53 PM
how were they inspired by Mike???

He&#39;s never used crap like "Yea, we got O to the L B I N"

and he&#39;s never used made up words like:
"yo, i&#39;m no nas
no, i&#39;m no ja&#39;"

you should change it to inspired by puff daddy or something. Saying that LP inspired you is an insult to them
lmao, we have our own version of Simon Cowell on the LPA forums. :P.
who&#39;s he? [/b][/quote]
He&#39;s the American Idol judge guy.

[Hybrid Soldier]

oh yaaa hah :lol:

[Todd]

didnt know that. I watch better things, such as south park and the simpsons :D

[Hybrid Soldier]

simpsons is good. the finale on sunday is going to be cool.

[[Darken Hybrid]]

i got inspired by mike &#39;cuz i lov the way he raps in the songs. so I decided to make a rap song and from listening too many raps i did the whole song. i also was inspired by other rap artist. but mostly mike :D by the way, OLBIN is my real name. so u guys think that the first and third verse are great?

[tkd_rap]

the first verce is, good job on that one&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[Bryan]

Originally posted by Linkin Master@Feb 15 2003, 01:36 PM
yea, back for the first time
tryin&#39; to make this rhyme
one of the greaters rhymes
introducing some pride
not to make you cry
not to make you blind
but to realize that u&#39;ve been livin&#39; a lie
release your inner side and be alive
we all know that we hate spy
it doesn&#39;t matter, we just gotta try
Im here to make you realize
be happy and dont wave good bye

yo, i&#39;m no nas
no, i&#39;m no ja&#39;
you gotta take it all back

let&#39;s keep up the game
all the same,
assumed the name
when you are trying to copy somebody else
they&#39;re gonna be in flame
just like you being ashame in 15 minutes of fame
these rhymes were inspired by Linkin Park
just like being in the dark with a big question mark
who&#39;s the one that&#39;s gonna make the big scratch?

Yea, we got O to the L B I N
dat&#39;s the name
just do it again & again
dont try to be afraid
&#39;coz then you are gonna be all ashamed
u gotta loose yourself man
then no respect is gained

you people so phony
I think y&#39;all too corny
gotta hit it big to make some money
gotta be independet like da bunny



so wat do u guys think? most of the song was inspired by mike&#39;s rapping. :mike:
I think it makes no sence at all.

Your song should at least have a meaning, I think you just threw a bunch of words together that happen to rhyme. Use your mind a little more ;)

Also, please dont tell me your serious about those lyrics being inspired by Mike Shinoda. If they are, you need to listen to his lyrics a little better.

[PuNk]

Originally posted by Todd@Feb 15 2003, 06:53 PM
how were they inspired by Mike???

He&#39;s never used crap like "Yea, we got O to the L B I N"

and he&#39;s never used made up words like:
"yo, i&#39;m no nas
no, i&#39;m no ja&#39;"

you should change it to inspired by puff daddy or something. Saying that LP inspired you is an insult to them
He didn&#39;t make up the nas and ja things, there rappers.. ;)

[*LiNkIn WiTcHy*]

wow really cool
do you have music to rap it to??

[*LiNkIn WiTcHy*]

wow really cool
do you have music to rap it to??
maybe you can put it on the net sometime then i&#39;d love to hear then

[IloveAmy03]

WOW...kid that rap was terrible...inspired by Mike...Maybe inspired by Mike back when he sucked in xero and he was goign threw puberty..damn that was terrible...but good job for the effort man..at least you have some time to throw a bunch of words together...other than that give up the rap thing..country music is always a good chance, just pick up an acoustic guitar......then talk about ice cream n ferris wheels..should work..have fun

[Will]

Originally posted by Linkin Master@Feb 16 2003, 12:37 PM
i got inspired by mike &#39;cuz i lov the way he raps in the songs. so I decided to make a rap song and from listening too many raps i did the whole song. i also was inspired by other rap artist. but mostly mike :D by the way, OLBIN is my real name. so u guys think that the first and third verse are great?
No, it sucks. It&#39;s terrible. You insult Mike by saying he inspired you. Even his work in Xero wasn&#39;t that bad (but it wasn&#39;t bad - it was good).

At least you didn&#39;t rap about 20 inch rims, hoes, or weed.

[[Darken Hybrid]]

Originally posted by *LiNkIn WiTcHy*@Feb 17 2003, 01:39 PM
wow really cool
do you have music to rap it to??
maybe you can put it on the net sometime then i&#39;d love to hear then
nah, I would like to recorded some way....


ppl, it&#39;s my first rap. it&#39;s not dat i am a pro at it. and it does have a meaning. read it carefully. B)

[Rybullet]

Originally posted by Todd@Feb 16 2003, 05:44 AM
didnt know that. I watch better things, such as south park and the simpsons :D
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