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Adam
11-05-2004, 11:52 PM
The one (My last love song)

Did you ever wonder why I slept so long
I wanted to dream of you for eternaty
Then you woke me...
My eyes got lost in your beauty
Stuttering for things to say to you
But actions are louder than words

this is my last love song
So I gotta make this clear
I loved you and you never knew
I always told you I needed something
All I wanted was you

I'm gonna hold you close
Once I grasp, I'm never gonna let go
I'm never gonna let you fall
I never wanna lose it all
'Cause you're the one...

The one who can sing me to sleep
The one who makes my heart beat
The one with lips so sweet
The one I hope to keep forever

Dark Knight
11-11-2004, 12:58 AM
i like it, for some reason i feel i can connect with it ^_^

"this is my last love song
So I gotta make this clear
I loved you and you never knew
I always told you I needed something
All I wanted was you"
:whistle:

this is my favorite part of the piece, i can definatly feel what you're saying with this, it is great keep up you're writing. :mike:

Adam
11-11-2004, 06:04 PM
Thanks for the comment :)

LigerZeroShneider
11-11-2004, 06:31 PM
Nice one. Loving someone and they never knew, something alot of people could connect to.

Adam
11-11-2004, 06:49 PM
Thanx for the comment LigerZeroShneider