Wasting Time and Tempting Fate

[Alacrity]

So, what do we call this?
We're standing on the line between the armies of love and hate
Wasting time and losing our lives by the moment
Tempting fate as it watches us laying here, idle
I'm fading away...
Or is it you?
It seems I'm losing sight of everything I once had in mind
Maybe it's me changing, but i'm new to this
I'm not asking for you to make my choices for me
...but maybe, could you could help?
I... I just want someone so bad
And if you could be that someone
That I could turn to
You'd be my hero... I don't think you really know
So, what are we going to call this now?
I'm just waiting on a sign from you


any comments or suggestions to make it better?

edit:// just fixed the second line a little.

[Adam]

Pretty good :)

[Alacrity]

Thank you ^_^

[Leslie]

Great job! ^_^

[Alacrity]

Thanks, Leslie :)

[Luke/Hellflame]

Nice Job :thumbsup:

[El Postwhore]

Very nice, Fiona...keep 'em comin! :D

[Alacrity]

Thanks ^_^