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sickcycle
10-26-2004, 04:18 PM
“Chaotic Dreams”

“Chaotic Dreams”

Ear drums burst to sound of the collapse
Watching my world crumble down around me
Standing in the ruin of my dreams, my world gone
I pick up the debris of our relationship
Try to put it all back together, but I fail as one
Wanting you to know how I feel but your to far
We are worlds away, nothing is what you say
Broken promises shake fate in my face

Something is so wrong/ when I turn and you not there/ It’s easy to forget/ easy to push you away/ but when the pain mixes with rage/ I don’t care

The ash covered asphalt, this ruins partly my fault
Sticks stones, glass and thorns rip to your bones
Duality, signs of insanity, your world made of clones
Step down, inside breakdown, worship celebrities on thrones
Your addiction, is the reason, I left you
Take pleasure in pain, insane, evil consumes you
Touches me, change I see, chaos is mine to give
Mixed messages, violence in flashes of darkness
Needs, for a needle, sick cycle spins again for the heartless
Blood drips, lips blistered, ears polluted by the bastard youth
Minds gone, addiction it’s on, and nothing that’s said is truth
Fake and cryptic, mistakes sift through the sick lie of life
Decision, you can’t run from this life is not bliss, but strife
Make it; it is what you want it to be, please come back to me



[X2] Something is so wrong/ when I turn and you not there/ It’s easy to forget/ easy to push you away/ but when the pain mixes with rage/ I don’t care
[Leads into a mini guitar solo, then breaks down into just drums (or a beat)]


Stop this, running this way is madness
Red runs on the surface with a purpose
Mind riots against you in the ruckus
Stop this, the chaos is endless
Finding peaces of your soul is useless
Don’t you know baby girl, I am were your heart is

Something is so wrong/ when I turn and your not there/ it be so easy to forget you/ but the problem is/ I/ still/ love you

FreeYourMind
10-26-2004, 08:29 PM
that's pretty cool

_diana_
10-26-2004, 08:53 PM
It's cool!

sickcycle
10-27-2004, 01:48 PM
thank you very much

Luke/Hellflame
10-27-2004, 02:33 PM
Its good :thumbsup:

the_chemist
12-21-2004, 04:16 AM
nothing is what you say
What the hell does that mean?!

it's good, it's good. :)

sickcycle
12-21-2004, 10:29 PM
Originally posted by th_dspatchr@Dec 21 2004, 04:16 AM
nothing is what you say
What the hell does that mean?!

it's good, it's good. :)
everything said is a lie

matttheskwirl14
12-22-2004, 06:34 PM
nice job

Faye
12-23-2004, 08:01 PM
thats pretty cool!

ChooseYourPoison
12-24-2004, 10:00 PM
I think you're one of the best writers on this board. Keep it up, it's amazing. ^_^

sickcycle
12-29-2004, 02:36 AM
thank you

LP_Freak_2735
12-31-2004, 02:45 AM
Very nice, Very nice. Keep it up! ;) :lol: :magic: :thumbsup: :king: The best I've seen so far.

sickcycle
01-04-2005, 02:42 AM
thanks again for the comments, i just edited it and gave it a new ending and diferent choris, this one works better for the band. I felt after such a strong rap verse, it needed something at the end, it didnt feel right the original way, so i took out the rock end and adden in the rap

OggeM
01-04-2005, 03:21 PM
It's bad.

Luke/Hellflame
01-04-2005, 05:00 PM
Originally posted by OggeM@Jan 4 2005, 03:21 PM
It's bad.
You know unless your saying its bad meaning good then you really shouldn't put it in those terms,you should say why you don't like it and what could be improved,not just 2 words :argh:

sickcycle
01-04-2005, 06:20 PM
Originally posted by hellflame Prophecy+Jan 4 2005, 05:00 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (hellflame Prophecy @ Jan 4 2005, 05:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--OggeM@Jan 4 2005, 03:21 PM
It's bad.
You know unless your saying its bad meaning good then you really shouldn't put it in those terms,you should say why you don't like it and what could be improved,not just 2 words :argh: [/b][/quote]
Yeah thanks man for sticking up for me. I don’t know if you mean bad as in badass, or bad as in it sucks ass, please tell me. If you think it sucks I don't mind criticism, in fact I welcome it if it is constructive. ;)

Luke/Hellflame
01-04-2005, 08:46 PM
Originally posted by sickcycle@Jan 4 2005, 06:20 PM
Yeah thanks man for sticking up for me.
Its cool man,I just don't like little so and so's disrespecting peoples work.

P.S I'm not flaming