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Rachel
10-23-2004, 11:45 PM
There's a tree infront of me, its dying branches swaying
The autumn leaves upon its arms are slowly decaying
I look inside and there i find that same f---ing tree
I realize autumn's in my soul and that f---ing tree is me

It's bare it's tattered it has no life but it stands so proud
And yet its funny how it stands out in a crowd
It's ostracized and there I see that lonely f---ing tree
No wonder i connect so well that f---ing tree is me

Sure people pretend that they care and try to keep it alive
But maybe thats not what it wants, maybe it WANTS to die
So dont bother trying to help out that worthless f---ing tree
Because you never f---ng tried to help out me

No you never ever f---ing TRIED to help out lonely me

So when I die bury me under that f---ng tree
That way you can forget the both of us, that f---ing tree and me
Doctor Manhattan
10-24-2004, 12:16 AM
THE UN-EDITED VERSION (I have permission from Mrs Rachel)

There's a tree infront of me, it's dying branches swaying
The autumn leaves upon its arms are slowly decaying
I look inside and there i find that same fucking tree
I realize autumn's in my soul and that fucking tree is me

It's bare it's tattered it has no life but it stands so proud
And yet its funny how it stands out in a crowd
It's ostracized and there I see that lonely fucking tree
No wonder i connect so well that fucking tree is me

Sure people pretend that they care and try to keep it alive
But maybe thats not what it wants, maybe it WANTS to die
So dont bother trying to help out that worthless fucking tree
Because you never fucking tried to help out me

No you never ever fucking TRIED to help out lonely me

So when I die bury me under that fucking tree
That way you can forget the both of us, that fucking tree and me
Twizted
10-24-2004, 03:59 AM
Wow, that was great. :)
esaul17
10-27-2004, 04:13 AM
Pretty cool. I'm not a fan of profanity in music, but I think you used it well, and not as just a cheap way to hide your emotions. I like the idea (well not of it happening but you know what I mean). Nice overall package.

8/10