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Jamie
10-20-2004, 10:32 PM
Everyday I wish that I didnt have to dream about you,
For every second I crave your sweet innocent smile
Just to wake up lying next to you,
The gentle kiss of your lips,
As I gently caress your cheek,
The simple smile that fills me with happiness,
I'm falling even more in love with you,
With every single moment I'm with you,
I hope the end never comes,
And as you recieve this rose from the bottom my heart,
I will never stop loving you, until it dies.

Leones
10-21-2004, 10:13 AM
aww Jamies, is it for Kim? it's beautiful. ^_^ but i think you forgot the word 'of' in the second line on the end.

*MoOn*
10-21-2004, 12:40 PM
WOOOOOOW ,that sooo beatiful thing i eva read well done keep on that Jamies ^_^ :)

Jamie
10-21-2004, 01:39 PM
Yeah Leones, it is for Kim..

Messy Marj
10-21-2004, 01:42 PM
Aww Jamies, that's so sweet. Very good job, I love it. ^_^

Jamie
10-21-2004, 03:07 PM
Thank you all

esaul17
10-28-2004, 04:54 AM
And 'recieve' is really spelt receive.

'i' before 'e' except after 'c', remember.

Jamie
10-29-2004, 09:32 PM
Thanks for that...I alwasy mess that up...