My reinterpretation of 'One Step Closer'

[ChooseYourPoison]

Okay, I got the feeling that One Step Closer was directed at someone, so I reinterpreted it as if the person was giving a response to the song.

So, here it is..

I have told you one too many times
That I have listened to all your rhymes
All those words you used to rant
But you're the one being ignorant
Don't wanna listen to what I say
You'll just ignore me anyway

Just like before...

If everything I say to you
Takes you one step closer to the edge
and you're about to break..
Should I just give you a push
Cause we're just one step coser to the edge
and I'm about to push...

You're the one that made the answers so unclear
Even if I shouted them loud and clear
All these thoughts now make perfect sense
Cause you're the one being ignorant
It's all about to go away
Never gonna come back again..

Now it's different than before...

Speak up when you're talking to me!

'Cause I'm about to PUSH.


yeah.

[Mechanical Christ]

That was enlightening.

[Luke/Hellflame]

Its good and I like it but some of the lyrics are totaly out of tone with the song.But a good attempt :thumbsup: