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Jamie
10-13-2004, 06:12 PM
This is the longest Ive ever took to write a song...4 days..Hope you all like it, because I do
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{verse 1}
I dont know what I did wrong
Everything I ever said didnt matter anymore
And now I've ended up all alone
Nowhere place to go, nowhere to turn
I should have payed more attention
Listened to the things I was told
But then again, nothing really made sense to me
It's not my fault I ended up this way

{chorus}
As I look at you through this stained glass window
I can see there's a glimmer of hope
At the end of the tunnel
I will dig through to find my exit

{verse 2}
When I look back at everything
I dont see why the blame got passed on to me
I wasnt the only one playing this game
You try to put all the blame on me
Now I have no place to go, no place to turn
Nothing ever seemed right
Everything seemed to fade away
Like a forgotton dream
And now

{chorus}
As I look at you through this stained glass window
I can see there's a glimmer of hope
At the end of the tunnel
I will dig through to find my exit

{bridge}
Why did you let me
WALK AWAY
It shouldnt have come to this
And I know
AND I KNOW
That I'll always be alone like this
As long I take the blame

{chorus}
As I look at you through this stained glass window
I can see there's a glimmer of hope
At the end of the tunnel
I will dig through to find my exit

Messy Marj
10-13-2004, 06:18 PM
I like it :D Good job Jamies.

Dedicated
10-13-2004, 06:20 PM
I really like this one, man!


The chorus is amazing...





:o





Keep it up, more? Or something? :lol:

Jamie
10-13-2004, 06:22 PM
Well...to tell you the truth...we've been writing, by 'we' I mean, Jaded Expression, have been writing this song for a while, and finally it has lyrics!

Scotty
10-13-2004, 08:46 PM
:o It was well worth the four days it took to write.

If you didn't get that, lets just say it's bloody brilliant.

Jamie
10-13-2004, 08:52 PM
Thanks alot man...Appreciate it

Luke/Hellflame
10-13-2004, 09:29 PM
Excellent!

freaklikemeh
10-13-2004, 11:30 PM
its soooo gooddd.. great job! i wish i cud write like you! :D

Jamie
10-13-2004, 11:33 PM
Thanks alot for the comments..

@freaklikemeh: its not hard, just write down your feelings. 9 times outta 10 when you read it it may sound all wrong, but when other people read it and they will tell you how good it is. Just learn from expirience basically.

hollowtubes
10-14-2004, 01:28 AM
Sounds like something Staind would write. I like it ^_^

Jamie
10-14-2004, 02:38 PM
Staind....hmmm cool I guess..I dont listen to them but what the hey!