ChooseYourPoison
10-11-2004, 09:33 PM
Okay I did this in study hall cause I got bored. If someone can give me some constructive critisism and a title, they get a cookie.
"The Untitled Poem"
Your insidious ways have
corrupted me for the last time
I shall not be kept down
And brought to my own confine
Evanesced feelings have
Been brought to full bloom
And thoughts of angst and sorrow
Have now been embedded
Into their own darkness and gloom
And as your heart within
Begins to fade and thin
I'll be there, hiding in the shadows
And as your final thread breaks you
I'll be there, watching you hang in the gallows
And as I watch with rain pouring down upon me
I already see them lowering your casket
I'll watch as all your friends, and even your foes
Are all brought to mourning
Beginning to wonder, that despite your friendships
If inside they are rejoycing
Hearing them shout to me
"you have no conscience!"
When truely, the hypocrisy lies within
Waiting to emerge and watch you
Silently lurking
Waiting for your internal lights to go dim
"The Untitled Poem"
Your insidious ways have
corrupted me for the last time
I shall not be kept down
And brought to my own confine
Evanesced feelings have
Been brought to full bloom
And thoughts of angst and sorrow
Have now been embedded
Into their own darkness and gloom
And as your heart within
Begins to fade and thin
I'll be there, hiding in the shadows
And as your final thread breaks you
I'll be there, watching you hang in the gallows
And as I watch with rain pouring down upon me
I already see them lowering your casket
I'll watch as all your friends, and even your foes
Are all brought to mourning
Beginning to wonder, that despite your friendships
If inside they are rejoycing
Hearing them shout to me
"you have no conscience!"
When truely, the hypocrisy lies within
Waiting to emerge and watch you
Silently lurking
Waiting for your internal lights to go dim