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Luke/Hellflame
10-10-2004, 02:55 PM
Forgotten:

From the top to the bottom
(We're lost in our thoughts)
The laws are forgotten
(They exist no more)
The sun has escaped me
(The stars shine up high)
You'll never enslave me
(For as long as I try)

From the top to the bottom
(we're lost in our thoughts)
The laws are forgotten
(They exist no more)
The sun has escaped me
(The stars shine up high)
You'll never ensave me
(for as long as I try)

These times are so dark,You can hardly see
I walk down a street and consequently
I'm stopped by the obsticles in the path ahead
Wishing I could take back everything I said
The words I sed to you so agressivly
Reflected off your backstabbing lies to me
The truth is how I think it should be
But instead you lied and said you'd remember me

From the top to the bottom
(we're lost in our thoughts)
The laws are forgotten
(They exist no more)
The sun has escaped me
(The stars shine up high)
You'll never ensave me
(for as long as I try)

From the top to the bottom
(we're lost in our thoughts)
The laws are forgotten
(They exist no more)
The sun has escaped me
(The stars shine up high)
You'll never ensave me
(for as long as I try)

In the memory you'll find me
Your lies burnt me up
The darkness grips us all tightly
Because the sun has pushed its luck

Moving all around
I'm dizzy from the ups and downs
The pollution of the false truth swifts around
In a society that depends on greed
Behind closed doors,It seems that you have planted the seed
And Then you have the guts to ask
How my attitude towards you has changed so fast
You left me alone to fend for myself
While I watched and laughed at how your kingdom fell
To the gutter you fell into a systimatic trance
People through coins but didn't even glance (at ya)
But Somehow you managed to build yourself back up again
but then you made the mistake of lying again!

From the top to the bottom
(we're lost in our thoughts)
The laws are forgotten
(They exist no more)
The sun has escaped me
(The stars shine up high)
You'll never ensave me
(for as long as I try)

From the top to the bottom
(we're lost in our thoughts)
The laws are forgotten
(They exist no more)
The sun has escaped me
(The stars shine up high)
You'll never ensave me
(for as long as I try)

In the memory you'll find me
Your lies burnt me up
The darkness grips us all tightly
Because the sun has pushed its luck

Yeah I got you caught in the act
You better step back
Your Telling me that
But I see right throught you

Yeah I got you caught in the act
You better step back
Your Telling me that
But I see right throught you

Yeah I got you caught in the act
You better step back
Your Telling me that
But I see right throught you

Yeah I got you caught in the act
You better step back
Your Telling me that
But I see right throught you

Yeah I got you caught in the act
You better step back
Your Telling me that
But I see right throught you

Yeah I got you caught in the act
You better step back
Your Telling me that
But I see right throught you

Yeah I got you caught in the act
You better step back
Your Telling me that
But I see right throught you

In the memory you'll find me
Your lies burnt me up
The darkness grips us all tightly
Because the sun has pushed its luck

In the memory
you will find me
Your lies burnt me up
The darkness grips us all tightly
Because the sun has pushed its luck


Points Of Authority:

Forfeit the game
Your in for a fight
You make me sick get out of my sight
Forfiet the game
Cos in the night
The battle begins,a test of your might

SHUT UP!!!

You love the way I talk to you
The way I say whats on my mind in my agresive voice
You fake your life,through a facade
YOUR TEARS,THEY'RE NOTHING TO ME

You'd Like to think your never wrong
(I'm sick of your words)
You have to act like your someone
(Your never concerned)
You want someone to hurt like you
(These points are unheard)
You wanna share what you've been through
(YOU LIVE WHAT YOU'VE LEARNED)

You love the things I say I'll do
The way I hurt myself again just to get back at you
You think your lies will get you through
YOUR TEARS,THEY'RE NOTHING TO ME

You'd like to think your never wrong
(I'm sick of your words)
You have to act like your somone
(your never concerned)
You want someone to hurt like you
(These points are not heard)
You wanna share what you've been through
YOU LIVE WHAT YOU'VE LEARNED

(yo,yo)
Forfeit the game
Stop your talk show
Conduct is what?
You'll never know
Forfeit the game
Cos tommorow
When this fights done
You'll reap what you sow

Forfeit The game
The battle has start
I'm in the light while your in the dark
Forfeit the game
Cos when you're behind bars
You'll be the one whos seeing the stars

You'd Like to think your never wrong
(Im sick of these words)
You have to act like your someone
(You're never concerned)
You want someone to hurt like you
(These Points will be heard)
You wanna share what you've been through
YOU LIVE WHAT YOU'VE LEARNED

You'd like to think your never wrong
(Forfeit the game)
(you've lived what you've learned)
You have to act like your someone
(forfeit the game)
(You've lived what you've learned)
You have to act like your someone
(forfeit the game)
(you've lived what you've learned)
You wanna share what you've been through
YOU'VE LIVED WHAT YOU'VE LEARDED



Please tell me what you think

Luke/Hellflame
10-11-2004, 08:04 PM
Good covers?

Adam
10-11-2004, 08:17 PM
There's no need to bump your own song just so people notice it and try to give you feedback just because no one replied to it in the first place -_- <_<


And I don't like it when people change songs into "thir own versions" it just annoys me.

But this sounds okay 7/10

Luke/Hellflame
10-11-2004, 08:19 PM
Originally posted by Adam@Oct 11 2004, 07:17 PM
There's no need to bump your own song just so people notice it and try to give you feedback just because no one replied to it in the first place -_- <_<


And I don't like it when people change songs into "thir own versions" it just annoys me.

But this sounds okay 7/10
well sorry if this upset you

iamrighthereandnow
10-15-2004, 04:07 PM
i would think some words would give you trouble to make it flow, the 'agressively' stands out to me the most if i think to the original versions and put your words into it, but that is just my point of view,which of course might be a complete rubbish. gotta right to be wroooooooooongggggggggggg! otherwise
:thumbsup:

Luke/Hellflame
10-16-2004, 04:57 PM
Thanks ^_^ ...I guess :huh:

NofxPants
10-16-2004, 05:19 PM
not bad, it's cool.

ChooseYourPoison
10-16-2004, 06:11 PM
The rhymes are great, but if you sing it to the tune of the songs, they don't flow with it.

Luke/Hellflame
10-17-2004, 11:35 AM
Originally posted by HybridMinoda@Oct 16 2004, 05:11 PM
The rhymes are great, but if you sing it to the tune of the songs, they don't flow with it.
Surprisingly they do.My band played the tabs for it (not execllent but a very good attempt) and I rapped the verses to My version of 'Forgotten' and it blended in perfectly.

Holiday
10-17-2004, 06:42 PM
heheheh very intesting. i like the forgotten one. cool renditions. ^_^

Mechanical Christ
10-18-2004, 06:25 AM
Not bad, not bad...

Luke/Hellflame
10-18-2004, 04:03 PM
Thank you ^_^