Revenge

[don't do this]

i just made this n guys...feel free to comment frankly(plz i'll take the criticism too..coz i know it'll help)
i'm new at this stuff so i'm not pretty sure of this one


Revenge

I'll pay you back for what you've done
and torment you till I have won
your very soul will shrink from me
what your end will be,you will see

You tried my patience now you'll pay
like you shattered my soul that day
I can never forget the sorrow the pain
from your life all the happiness I'll drain

I'll make you cry like you made me long ago
the broken pieces of your life will blow
the winds will take you far from destiny
I promise you,I'll make your life dreary

You'll beg you'll cry
in pain and grief you'll die
what you did to my life wasn't worth forgiving
I'll make yours not worth living

Red hot the fire denies
darkness where danger lies
the time has gone it will not stay
you'll curse the day you crossed my way

[~*Numb*~]

it's really good but i am glad that i am not the person you are talking about! :lol: