Scream Your Name

[Jamie]

With every breath you take
Holds me closer to your heart
And the silence is screaming words at me
Every move's misleading
As it comes to an end

There's fifty thousand ways I could
Scream your name
Louder than anything you have heard
And it cuts through your skin as it
Seeps through your mind

After all this time
We still can't seem to get it right
The silence is getting louder
Since you can't control your words
All your moves are misleading
As it comes to an end

There's fifty thousand ways I could
Scream your name
Louder than anything you have heard
And it cuts through your skin as it
Seeps through your mind

(whispers) Am I just a dream?

[Stina]

Wow..that's amazing. You did a really good job on that. It's really touching. *sigh* I wish i could write like that :(

[Jamie]

Umm..thanks Stina

[Andrea]

Simply excellent! :)

[don't do this]

some guys have all the LUCK!!
u got some serious skill here man....itz totally WOW :peace:

[Ppr:Kut]

Originally posted by kenji crazy@Jul 5 2004, 12:22 PM
some guys have all the LUCK!!
u got some serious skill here man....itz totally WOW :peace:
luck.. ? :huh:

[Jamie]

Yea...luck..I need alot of it..Im totally crap at this

[Ppr:Kut]

luck? you need luck? thats a lie... youre the luckiest person I've ever seen.. also youre really good at this..

[*figure.09*]

Originally posted by kenji crazy@Jul 5 2004, 10:22 AM
some guys have all the LUCK!!
u got some serious skill here man....itz totally WOW :peace:
i agree with u everyone here has awesome talent in everything except for me *sigh* o well :(

[~*Numb*~]

yes everyone has some sort of talent, and then there is me....

the poem is really good, .broken fist. its very touching

[don't do this]

that's why i said ...LUCK
this sorta stuff can't come to all of us.n it skipped me especially OH SO BAD :(

[*figure.09*]

Originally posted by kenji crazy@Jul 5 2004, 04:50 PM
that's why i said ...LUCK
this sorta stuff can't come to all of us.n it skipped me especially OH SO BAD :(
write us sumthin, i wanna c just HOW bad u r! jk, i wanna c wut u got!!!

[Jamie]

Yeah, Kenji..show us your writing chops..

[don't do this]

here goes nothing guys :wth:

it's so full of sometimes that it's kinda draggy but other than that....pretty ok

Sometimes

Sometimes the whole world bows before you
Sometimes every lie is a truth
Sometimes victory comes before defeat
Sometimes the world bows at your feet

Sometimes life waits for death
Sometime thorns are woven into a wreath
Sometimes light darkens the day
Sometimes every colour seems grey

To put it all together
Changes come forever
But life will be just the same
And end without leaving a stain......
End like every other game....

though i like Revenge better.... :blush:

[Jamie]

Its good..could you please make a seperate topic for it though..as this is my thread :)