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Trish
06-30-2004, 09:36 AM
I'm sorry
I'm sorry for the things I did
I'm sorry for the things I didn't do
I'm sorry for being alive
I'm sorry that my skin isn't tanned as you want it to be
I'm sorry that my eyes aren't the colour you desire
I'm sorry that I wear makeup
I'm sorry I can't make anyone laugh
I'm sorry I don't know how to help
I'm sorry for writing for you
I'm sorry that I'm not perfect
I'm sorry you don't like the same music I do
I'm sorry we don't get along
I'm sorry for lying for you
I'm sorry for crying for you
I'm sorry I can't do those things
I'm sorry I know little
I'm sorry I'm not talented
I'm sorry for all the things I do wrong
I'm sorry you had to go
I'm sorry I'm so far away
I'm sorry I cut myself
I'm sorry I was depressed
I'm sorry I didn't kill myself
I'm sorry because I was so close to doing it
I'm sorry for being weak
I'm sorry for not being popular
I'm sorry I'm not beautiful
I'm sorry I'm not angel
I'm sorry I don't look like her
I'm sorry for not conforming
I'm sorry you're not proud of me
I'm sorry for speaking my mind
I'm sorry for everything
Can you forgive me?
Evi
06-30-2004, 01:09 PM
wow! It's very good , nice work :)
Trish
06-30-2004, 01:17 PM
Originally posted by fieke@Jun 30 2004, 10:09 PM
wow! It's very good , nice work :)
Thanks very much.

Your comment means alot to me :)
Hybrid_Bunny
06-30-2004, 02:22 PM
That's really good, Trish. I hope you never have to apologize for any of those things though! :hugz:
Jamie
06-30-2004, 03:55 PM
Thats cool


:peace:
brokenLP
07-01-2004, 04:38 AM
i like it. it's good!
Cassie
07-01-2004, 04:51 AM
Wow. That's really well done.

I'm sorry for crying for you

That one hits home. Aaw Trishy. :hugz:
Blaze
07-01-2004, 04:54 AM
wow. interesting style. i did somthing kinda simaller to that once.

good job very sad.
Trish
07-01-2004, 01:04 PM
Originally posted by Hybrid_Bunny@Jun 30 2004, 11:22 PM
That's really good, Trish. I hope you never have to apologize for any of those things though! :hugz:
Hehe, too late.
I just did.


Thanks very much to everyone though. :blush:
Ppr:Kut
07-01-2004, 01:19 PM
wow.. this is so.. amazing.. :mellow: ^_^
Trish
07-01-2004, 01:43 PM
Originally posted by Ppr:Kut@Jul 1 2004, 10:19 PM
wow.. this is so.. amazing.. :mellow: ^_^
Amazing? :mellow:

Thanks! ^_^
~*Numb*~
07-02-2004, 01:47 AM
wow that is so...so... emotional i'm sorry you had to feel that way about someone... the poem howevere is amazing! you can almost feel the pain when you read it... i feel for you, even though i have no idea who you are
^_^