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Cassie
06-29-2004, 08:49 PM
Black

These little black nails,
They've been through hell.
Was it my life or your's?
I never could tell.

And all the while you're watching me,
From the outside of this cage.

But I'd hate to think I'd leave you,
Without your face between my palms.
Hold me up in your arms,
And I'll never wanna come down.

I'm sorry I f*cked up this time,
The blood will settle.
My skin so white,
These words like ice.

It's all so final,
The death of us.
As for my little black heart,
I never could tell.

Comments would be much appreciated, thankies. :)

Hybrid Soldier
06-29-2004, 09:06 PM
It's really good. :)

Cassie
06-29-2004, 09:19 PM
You think so? :mellow: I was a little unsure, but thank you. :blush: ... *puppy* lol.

~*Numb*~
07-06-2004, 04:00 AM
yea i like it! its very true sounding... :mellow:

Omar A
07-06-2004, 05:00 AM
Very Awesome Cassie

And all the while you're watching me,
From the outside of this cage.

Great verse!

don't do this
07-06-2004, 11:20 AM
:thumbsup: