bla2... boring

[HARLEYsheXda]

thrashing my life away, bit by bit
i hate what i see, i rather not be me
scarred by the reflection of misery
seems to fade away upon my sanity

saturated mind end up in oblivion
within empty hearts full of tension
i'll wait for the time
the first light to shine
on top of my head
on top of my mind...

[ass_kicker]

i like it ^_^

[~*Numb*~]

i think it is really good you showed good emotion and teh words rhymed! :D

[HARLEYsheXda]

should i run?
where would i hide?
what would i do when it's clearly out of my might?
should i stay?
dont leave me this way
take me somewhere;
somewhere far away...

i'm not scared
i'm not weak
it's hard to pretend that i'm not sick
i'm blunt
out of my mind
not a friend
out of a kind...

- thanks for the review.