Can't Hold On

[Anya]

I haven't written in a long time so it may be a little shabby. Please comment though. I'd enjoy some input so I know if it's good or bad or not. Thanks. ;)

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-Can't Hold On-

so much to say
but not a thousand words can tell you how I feel
I know you say you understand me
but these wounds they stay unhealed
can you drift away the pain
this silent emptiness inside
it's racking in my mind to find the words I left behind

I can't hold on any longer
I can't hold on any longer
I need you there to make me stronger

I can't breathe when your near me
this pain could almost kill me
this undeniable hunger.. for you

can't look back
when I do I see my own two eyes
they're staring back at me
can't decide
who to trust
but the end is allways the beginning

I can't hold on any longer
I can't hold on any longer
I need you there to make me stronger

I can't breathe when your near me
this pain could almost kill me
this undeniable hunger.. for you

[Willstar]

That was really awesome, Anya. You can feel the emotion in it. Great job. 9/10

[Anya]

Thank you, Will. :)

[The Modfather]

"Kind of shabby" hardly. It's more like one of the greatest things you've written. The choruses werent as strong as the rest of the song so therefore I'll give it a 9/10 because everything is still great and you can feel the emotion hardcore.

[Anya]

Thankyou. Yeah I know I suck at choruses really badly lol. If had some insperation next time maybe it'll turn out better hopefully. :)

[Ppr:Kut]

this is nice 8/10 ^_^

[Michele]

i love it. who's it about? :mellow:

[Anya]

It's about alot of things. Some of it's about Elijah I suppose but it's really about things from a long time ago. I can't remember much of what it was about unless I go through it word for word. :P

[~*Numb*~]

that is really awsome deffinately a 9/10 you can really put emotions into words... *hope that made sense*

[Anya]

Yeah it makes sense I guess. Thanks though. :lol: