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Trish
06-14-2004, 12:45 PM
When the rain falls from the sky and I'm all alone
I wish for someone to be there with me
I wrap my arms around myself and stare out the window
Then I wish for someone elses arms to be holding me
When I lay alone in my empty bed
I wonder what you're doing and if you think of me

Do you undersand what you mean to me?
More than you think
Do you understand what I feel for you?
More than you feel for me

When the tears fall from my eyes and I'm all alone
I wish for you to be there with me
I cut my arms, releasing pain, but still brings more
Then I wish for your arms to be holding me
Then I lay alone, in my empty bed, thinking of you
I wonder if you care, and if you know me

Do you understand what you mean to me?
More than I mean to you
Do you understand anything I'm saying?
I didn't think so
Leslie
06-14-2004, 11:24 PM
Trish, this is incredible... you have written such amazing lyrics/poety. I can really feel the emotion in it. AWESOME JOB!
linktolinkinpark
06-15-2004, 03:32 AM
I love this, I can totally relate, if this was written because of personal experience, if not, I didn't say anything!!!! :whistle: but great lyrics or poetry or whatever, it was beautiful and meaningful!!!!
Trish
06-15-2004, 11:15 AM
Originally posted by Leslie@Jun 15 2004, 08:24 AM
Trish, this is incredible... you have written such amazing lyrics/poety. I can really feel the emotion in it. AWESOME JOB!
^_^ Wow, thankyou very much for the FANTASTIC comment!
Hybrid_Bunny
06-15-2004, 02:21 PM
Originally posted by Leslie@Jun 14 2004, 06:24 PM
Trish, this is incredible... you have written such amazing lyrics/poety. I can really feel the emotion in it. AWESOME JOB!
I agree. You're really good at writing how you feel and turning it into a beautiful piece of poetry. Really beautiful, Trish. So relatable too.
Jamie
06-15-2004, 07:29 PM
SUPERB..thats all I got to say
Arhaz
06-15-2004, 07:34 PM
it's beautiful, picturesque, a lot of visual senses, all in all bravo!
Trish
06-16-2004, 07:50 AM
:blush: Thankyou all so much :blush:
The person I wrote it for loved it and said "this is the most beautiful thing some-one has ever done for me...."
I'm happy.
Ppr:Kut
06-18-2004, 04:45 PM
I can really relate to that.... awesome :)
Debus
06-18-2004, 10:45 PM
Wow, that's great Trish ^_^
Trish
06-19-2004, 11:45 AM
Thankyou both so much!
^_^
Omar A
06-19-2004, 04:34 PM
####### awesome :o

Good job Trish
Jamie
06-19-2004, 06:02 PM
Some talented people on here I believe
Trish
06-20-2004, 11:00 AM
Thanks.
There are ALOT of talented people one here!
Including you. :chemist: