A Mi Amor

[Jamie]

Su mi amor, mi vida, el aire que respiro
Sus brazos, I de largo a bajar en
Y como el sol fija, el cielo da vuelta al azul
El centelleo en su ojo, me fija libre
Su sonrisa, el tacto blando de sus labios

Translation:

(Your my life, my love, the air I breathe)
(Your arms, I long to fall into)
(And as the sun sets, the sky turns blue)
(The twinkle in your eye, sets me free)
(Your smile, the tender touch of your lips)

[arT saveS]

I like it a lot. It's quite short, but still good. I also like how you have it in spanish.

[Jamie]

Yeah, I transalted it..I wanted to write something romantic for my girlfriend and I think I pulled it off

[Branden]

Cool, I like it. 9/10. ^_^

[LPNeSSRGB]

Way to go Jamie! It's very cool. :D

[Ppr:Kut]

Originally posted by .Broken Fist@Jun 11 2004, 07:02 PM
Yeah, I transalted it..I wanted to write something romantic for my girlfriend and I think I pulled it off
you definately did ;)

[Jamie]

Yeah...I think so too..and the response from her was great

[Trish]

:mellow:
It's so beautiful.
Your girlfriend is so lucky.

I wish someone would write something romantic for me one day.

[Ppr:Kut]

Originally posted by Trish@Jun 14 2004, 01:43 PM
:mellow:
It's so beautiful.
Your girlfriend is so lucky.

I wish someone would write something romantic for me one day.
yeah.. yeah...

[Leslie]

This is great... It's really romantic. Awesome job. :)

[linktolinkinpark]

If someone wrote something this romantic for me, I'd die!!!! no one likes me, so somethin like this would be quite a shock!!! Oh well, I don't have to worry about dying cuz it wont happen. No one would ever do that for me... But great writing!!! :)

[Glenn]

Yeah, writing it in another language looks more romantic. :P Good job though. :)

[Jamie]

Thanks