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Evi
06-10-2004, 04:39 PM
wow! i finally wrote a new song :) . It's sad but i feel ####ed up today,so that's what my song is about

please comment :P
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My Underworld
I just woke up today , after dreaming for so long
I just faced the reality today, and it’s harder than I can take
I’ve just realised, that pain is a beautiful word
But when the meaning shows trough
It’s even more

Cause the more you take the harder I rot away
The more I break, The harder you seem to enjoy
The harder I laugh, The more you look sad
The more I give, The more you take

Caught in my world
Giving sins of suicide
Feeling manipulated
By Any Of You

All the fear that overcome me, I’ve waited for so long
To enjoy what I had, and never wanted more
You changed what I never had , in a meantime you were mine
But than the heartache came up, and it’s all just screwed up again

The more I give away, the harder I feel suicidal
The more I dream, The reality just gets harder
The more I cry, The more you seem to smile
The more you take, The more I give

Caught in my world
Giving sins of suicide
Feeling manipulated
By Any Of You

I don’t want to cry all again
I’ve wasted enough tears on you
You made me alive again
But that doesn’t mean you have to #### me up
So break the ache again
Break the ache again


Caught in my world
Giving sins of suicide
Feeling manipulated
By Any Of You
Break the ache again

arT saveS
06-10-2004, 04:44 PM
Sounds like Staind.


`nuff said.
















...meaning I like it.

Evi
06-10-2004, 06:40 PM
thnx :P .. actually i don't listen to staind :lol:

Dr. Satan
06-10-2004, 07:58 PM
Nice song man. I wish I could write....

Evi
06-17-2004, 06:42 PM
thnx :D

Aplace_4_MyHead
07-11-2004, 02:35 AM
totaly awesome. excelent stuff.
Keep it up iwanna read more.