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Glenn
06-06-2004, 02:38 AM
And all this time, I assumed self-doubt
And all this time, I never knew what it was about
And all these times, I felt like everyone was against me
Until recently, I never knew who I’d be
So start right now, get off your ass
Before you know it, your whole life will pass
And all this time, I never made a move
The only time I rose, was to prove
That I could succeed in my life
And that I could overcome the strife
I was never strong enough
My brain was always in cuffs
I searched my whole life and finally found the key
Then the dreams were clear and I could finally see
Now I can walk with my head held high
I can pursue the dreams and perfect myself until I die

ch|e|s|t|er
06-06-2004, 10:01 AM
eh-pretty good! 7/10 :)

ass_kicker
06-07-2004, 06:12 PM
its great ^_^

Glenn
06-10-2004, 03:01 AM
Thanks! :) Any more comments? :D