The Ending Night

[Alacrity]

And every night we screamed out hearts out
Could become a sunset we shared
And every unanswered call to me
Could become a night we spent together
And every time we said goodbye
Could've been an awesome concert we went to
Then maybe you'd be here with me right now
And not a darkened night in the past


Comments appreciated, thanks to Nate for help with the title :)

[Blaze]

short pretty and sad very nice

7/10

[arT saveS]

I love it, though I'm not big for love poems. It was very good! 9/10

[Alacrity]

Thanks :blush:

[Andrea]

I like it. Very good! :)

[tkd_rap]

nice, short poem, 6.9/10!!!!!!