Chidren of America

[Chris Luke]

Children are like Puppets
Under your wires
You tell them what you want
they preform
But this child hated
Hated yourcontroled
The kid of Problems
Child Abuse
School
Steryotypes
The Bully
Daddy didn't give a F***
Mommy semed she didn't care
Aunty hated him
Uncle wanted to die
Surely you rember F***king with the boy
Nobody cared
But then you snapped him like a ruler
Bought a gun at A Shop
It semmed that Daddy Didn't give a F***
Mommy didn't even care
Aunty hated him
Uncle wanted to die
Put the gun to his mouth with 1 word he
said Hate
Pulled the trigger every one
remberd him then
But no one cared about the
Harmless little puppet
Not left to entreain any more

(inspired by my childhood and jeremy)

[Leones]

I like it alot, but i'm sorry you didn't have had a nice youth. I recognize jeremy in it, I like alot. :)

[Chris Luke]

Thanks man. I couldn't think of anything to write then Jeremy poped up.
I used that song as a bridge and built up on it.

[Inkybro]

I'm really not into this kind of stuff but I think it throws a point into people's heads and shows them how some kids have to live you know? And just because I don't LISTEN to this kind of stuff doesn't mean I don't like it, I think it's good and you really got the point across.

[Mechanical Christ]

America is really f**cked up.

[Michele]

I really, really like it :D espechially "daddy didnt give a ####" ... reminds me of my sperm donar ;)

[Omar A]

Man I love what you wrote

Great Job