Blood, Booger and A Bunch of Idiots

[Atsuzen]

Ficcy (http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1876019&time=1085389756)

Mm, wrote that about a year ago. It's a fan fiction for an anime called Gensomaden Saiyuki. Review, please!

[Messy Marj]

:lol: i like it!

First it was a bit confusing for me, cuz i'm not that good in english. But it's clear now.

hahaha, Goku is my favourite i think. He makes me laugh with his 'bloodie-thing'. :lol:

[Atsuzen]

I wrote this when I was in a REALLY hyper mood, hehe! That's why it turned out like that. When I'm hyper, it's kinda hard for me to make sense. I talk crap, literally. But the ending part was not really good, because I left it hanging and continued it after a month or two. Hmm ...

[Mechanical Christ]

Don't end it anymore, it's a super ending. My fave part is


“LET ME GO, YOU OLD FART!!!”

Hakkai : crawling on the floor, clutching his throat HAA!!! FOO!!! HAA!!! FOO!!! HAA!!! FOO!!!

Hakkai : (you can say he’s suffering from a bad case of asthma) HAAAAA!!! FOOOOO!!! HAAAAAA!!! FOOO!!! HAAAA!!!! FOOOOO!!!

Hakkai : (about to fall out of the jeep) FAAAAA!!! POOOOO!!! FAAAAA!!! POOOOO!!! FAAAAA!!! POOOOO!!!

Sanzo : For crap-ness sake, stop that idiotic crap, Hakkai, you idiotic idiot!

Hakkai : FAAAAA, POOOOO???

PLOP!

Hakkai did a back-flip somersault and fell to the ground.

Hakkai : his mouth practically kissing the booger-ish ground FA-HAAAA!!! POO-HOOOO!!! FA-HAAAA!!! POO-HOOOO!!!

Gojyo : Hey, it actually works, you know … I used Neutrogena and the zit on my forehead vanished so quickly …

Goku : You mean you’ve actually used Neutrogena before?! I thought it was for girls!

Sanzo : So, you had a zit before, eh?

Gojyo : What’s wrong with that? vein throbbing Didn’t you have one before?

Sanzo : Drinking a large amount of Hannya’s water everyday keeps my forehead from getting lumpy.

Gojyo : Stupid monk.

Hakkai : OH, NO! I’VE GOT A ZIT!!!

Gojyo : ACH! MY BA-YU-TI-FOOL HAIR’S DISAPPEARING!!!


Goku : BWAK!

Sanzo : MAK!

Hakkai : BAPAK!

She started stomping on it.

Goku : MAMI!

Sanzo : SAMI!

Hakkai : SALAMI!

Then she started jumping on it.

Goku : TORTILLA!

Sanzo : MOZILLA!

Hakkai : GODZILLA!

Last of all, she took out her gun and shot it.

Goku : LET IT GO!

Sanzo : SHINJIYOU!

Hakkai : POOPOOT!!!

Atsuzen : Wake up, stupid people! The tensai is here!