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Jamie
05-20-2004, 05:04 PM
Another forgotten memory, another forgotten love
Another step closer, to the edge, and I'm breaking
One more question, without a reason
One more drop of blood to sell your soul
Give me another reason, to slow the heartbreak
Direct me to the source of your concieved child

The sadness of a dead forest savaged in funeral steel
Your eyes are a twightlight tragedy
The forever darkness of suffering

A sunlight of a cursed corpse, laying stained on the ground
A forgotten memory, a fallen love
Another step closer to the edge
One last gasp of air, and I'm struggling
One more drop of blood to sell your soul
Give me another reason, to slow the heartbreak
Tortured winds, slip through my grasp

The sadness of a dead forest savaged in funeral steel
Your eyes are a twightlight tragedy
The forever darkness of suffering

Fallen angels line my route
Burned souls, scattered ashes

Scarred lives, ruined in the night
Tearing my feelings apart

I'll walk a thousand miles
Just to see the twinkle in your eyes

The sadness of a dead forest savaged in funeral steel
Your eyes are a twightlight tragedy
The forever darkness of suffering

Scarlet
05-20-2004, 10:53 PM
That's a very great poem. It has a lot of strong words. I really liked it. :)

My favorite part was:

The sadness of a dead forest savaged in funeral steel
Your eyes are a twightlight tragedy
The forever darkness of suffering

Jamie
05-21-2004, 02:43 PM
Its the chorus to the song:)

Atsuzen
05-22-2004, 02:12 PM
Uhh, song or poem? :unsure:

Anyway, it's nice! I like the words you used. :lol:

Adam
05-23-2004, 09:46 PM
cool

Omar A
05-23-2004, 09:49 PM
You've got talents.

Another step closer, to the edge, and I'm breaking

You were inspired by Lp weren't u :lol:

Jamie
05-24-2004, 08:26 PM
Erm...rather unitnetionally..but I do recognise the line your on about ;)