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[Glenn]

I’ve come upon her eyes, they show diverse emotion.
Sunlight on her smile confirming her devotion
She'll force a vigorous wind and a long heavy rain
Upon my unforgiving sickness and every day of pain
Sending wind when I’m away, asking where I’ve been
And sending another wind for me to fly to her again
Not one single ray of sunshine will I miss
Not one single night where I’ll forget a kiss.

[tkd_rap]

short, but beautifull

[RememberingNever]

I liked the rhymes. It was short but still very good. ;)

[tkd_rap]

a very good little piece of work...just wanted to ask, do you plan on making a longer poem?

[Trish]

Aw, it's very beautiful! ^_^

[Glenn]

Originally posted by tkd_rap@May 22 2004, 03:39 PM
a very good little piece of work...just wanted to ask, do you plan on making a longer poem?
Yeah, when I stop being lazy. :P