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Atsuzen
05-18-2004, 08:30 AM
THE STORY OF A KING

Let go of your contempt for life
Surrender, retreat, withdraw your knife
Release your slaves, return their freedom
Bring back the peace, restore your kingdom

We would like to tell you a story
A tale of a man, a human being just like us
2 Amanah proudly presents
“The Story of a King”

Once lush and beautiful
With rolling lawns and snow-peaked mountains
Peaceful and undisturbed
Was a united kingdom
Through the wood folk would frolic
In the rivers fish would dance
Elders laughed as children sang
Happiness spread throughout the land
“And evil was but a myth.”

But darkness soon took over the joy
As a new king arose
A monster, a demon from hell, a spiteful creature
… a man
He caused pain and instilled fear
His words were poison, his actions were malice
The woods were in flames
In the rivers flowed blood
No longer did the children play games
But instead were enslaved and forced to work
Lost and fallen was a mighty empire
“And love was a part of history.”

(*Sound effects: war)
*“This is my land! I am king! You will all bow to me!”
“We will fight for our freedom! Do not let him triumph!”
“Ignorant fools! Guards, seize them!”
[wails and screams]*

War broke between the people and the king
Turning the once-glorious land into a lethal battlefield
Some people lay dying, some lay dead
Others were fighting to kill
While the rest fought to survive
Amidst the chaos, there was a soundless bloody cry of grief
The cry of death

A red sun rose high above the land
The land that had been spilled with crimson blood
Dead bodies lay sprawled across the ground
And children cried as they looked around
While soldiers held their defence with loyalty
Serving to ensure the king’s safety
The people fought with love, courage and hope on their side
To once and for all bring the darkness and despair to an end

The king swung his sword to and fro
Slaughtering anyone who dared defy him
As he laid his eyes upon his land
He filled the air with his menacing laugh
“Mwahahaha!”
But all of a sudden
He felt a deep, painful stab in his back
Blood oozed out of the wound
Soon gushing out like a waterfall
As he swung his sword helplessly, aimlessly
Unable to gather his strength as he could before
His knees gave way and he soon fell
Onto the solid ground

The king’s gaze fell upon his surroundings again
But this time, he saw it from a different point of view
No longer did he look at the people with hatred
Instead, he looked at them with love
Proud of their strength as one
His eyes then darted to a child, a little boy
Crying over his mother, who lay motionless, dead
A silent tear trickled down the king's face
As he knew that he was the one responsible
He had caused the child's anguish, the immeasurable sorrow
The white-hot pain began to set
As the king felt his emotions taking over
Searing his heart with guilt and regret

“*gasp* Your Highness! You’re wounded!”
“Quick! Bring him back to the castle!”
Slowly, the king shook his head, refusing to be aided
For he knew his actions could not be forgiven
“End the war and do what is right to restore peace.”
Glancing at his people for the last time
He drew his final breath and closed his eyes
Falling into a deep sleep, never to awake again

The king only saw his wrong
When it was too late
So friends, take heed
Do not fill your hearts
With anger, with greed, with jealousy, with pride
Let hope be your guide
And love be at your side


... how was it? My friend and I wrote this poem together. It's not a literal poem, but it's actually a poem written for Choral Speaking. Anyone heard of Choral Speaking?

Anyway, leave some comments, please!

Messy Marj
05-18-2004, 11:46 AM
It's like i'm reading in a history book. Yeah, it was fun to read ^_^
I give it a 8,5/10 :)


btw: nope, never heard of Choral Speaking.

Atsuzen
05-18-2004, 11:52 AM
Choral Speaking ... haha. I can trace some BBGS-ians here if anyone knows what Choral Speaking is ...

tkd_rap
05-18-2004, 02:00 PM
Originally posted by plc4theglue@May 18 2004, 10:52 AM
Choral Speaking ... haha. I can trace some BBGS-ians here if anyone knows what Choral Speaking is ...
dont know what it is, but i can guess. Simply like reading a story, but more like a poem to a bunch of people? dumb guess i know, any way very good story, original, and good morals. I would love to hear you speak it choraly, lol

Atsuzen
05-19-2004, 09:15 AM
OK, brief explanation on Choral Speaking :

Originated by a school called BBGS (yea, that's where I'm from) and the tradition has been continued until today (though we've moved to a new location, and changed the name of the school -- the tradition seems to be fading away, 'cause there's a whole bunch of new kids, and, well, they don't take Choral Speaking seriously). The poems do not have fixed topics, in other words, can be written about anything, although issues such as racism are restricted. Poems are about 5 to 7 minutes long.

The students are arranged in three rows. The back row would have to stand on a bench, or else nobody would be able to see them (obviously). A conductress/conductor will conduct the group. He/She will tell the group if they're too loud, too soft, too stiff, lacking facial expressions, etc. by using signals. All hail the Almighty Conductor.

Ah, presentation. No, the students don't just stand at their positions, reciting the poem like statues. Instead, they include facial expressions and body movement while presenting the poem (though you can only move torso and above)(no unnecessary twitches, even if your nose is itching). The tone/volume changes as the mood of the poem changes. Most importantly, the group must be able to project their voices loudly so that the audience will be able to hear what they're saying. One more thing : smiling is important when you first present yourself on stage, and when you leave the stage.

Wondering why I use the word 'students'? Choral Speaking competitions are held at primary and secondary levels throughout the country once every year. No, I don't think you'd stumble upon a group of adults doing Choral Speaking. Nope.


... hmm, dunno if I explained it right. Maybe there's more about it ... Anyhow, it's something like that. :lol:

Trish
05-19-2004, 01:49 PM
It's WOW!

Leones
05-19-2004, 05:22 PM
this is more than wow, this is wow


this is really great work, this is awesome. (w00t)

Atsuzen
05-20-2004, 11:50 AM
(w00t) Really glad you guys like it!

My teacher doesn't, though. I was in a sore-loser mood today because of it ... hehe!