Within the Arms of Sadness

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  1. arT saveS

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    I offer sacrifice to the one who has imprisoned me to this body
    Let me not be kept to this being that I long to escape
    Give me the strength to take away this life to give me the courage to…
    Disrupt the course of this miserable existence
    So I will never know that I am weak, that I can’t go on…
    Remind me that death is what I want so when I am gone I wont regret it
    So that when I end this life, believing in no heaven or hell
    I will be alone in the abyss of my own consciousness
    Drifting through thoughts and dreams and hopes and beliefs
    Remembering those I lost and those I loved
    Knowing I will never see them again
    And my love, who once loved me…
    I will never forget the beauty in her smile
    Or the gaze of her eyes
    And once I am gone, maybe she will love me again
    But human pleasure is nothing to stay here for
    I will not stay to die in evil and sin
    Within the arms of sadness, all hope is lost like many have said.


    Edit: spelling correction
     
  2. Muri

    Muri It never ends.

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    ^_^ Wow. I really like it. Keep it going!
     
  3. lp_sk8ergurl

    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

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    It's one of your best poems.
     
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    arT saveS Y2K

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    Thank you. :)
     
  5. D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Damn, i have to agree.
    This poem is soo good i feel like ripping it off and selling it :whistle: . but i wont *cough*

    I mean. this is fantastic, so much tallent in one person. Keep it up.
     
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    Wow, thank you much. :)
     
  7. fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    yeah, i love your poems! this one was another one of those good ones! looking forward to seeing more. ;)
     
  8. Il inno di morte

    Il inno di morte A noi si schiude il ciel...

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    Damn, i have to agree.
    This poem is soo good i feel like ripping it off and selling it :whistle: . but i wont *cough*

    I mean. this is fantastic, so much tallent in one person. Keep it up. [/b][/quote]
    I agree totally. Really deep. I must say is one of the best I've ever seen here. Wow, you got soem real talent, keep it goin'!!!

    *coughs* perhaps you could *coughs* take a look at *coughs* my stuff later *coughs* :lol:
     
  9. arT saveS

    arT saveS Y2K

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    I agree totally. Really deep. I must say is one of the best I've ever seen here. Wow, you got soem real talent, keep it goin'!!!

    *coughs* perhaps you could *coughs* take a look at *coughs* my stuff later *coughs* :lol: [/b][/quote]
    Ah...I'm guessing you don't know who this is. I don't know if you remembe "Faaip de Oiad"...

    And I think I've read some of your stuff, lemme see what you've written lately.
     
  10. Razan

    Razan SUGAAAR!

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    Wow, amazing keep it up!
     
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    Thank you. :)
     

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