Where true men go

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  1. Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    I tried...comments?

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    You walk all alone
    and you listen to no-one as you roam

    You're shivering
    and it's below freezing on the inside
    Funny. Just a few moments ago you were burning up
    Well, you're alone and you get to thinking,
    staring at that last sip of vodka at the bottom of your cup

    What's keeping you here?

    Go ahead, touch the sun, kissing the horizon
    Just don't burn yourself when you cross the line
    C'mon kid, you'll be fine.
    Just don't forget to bring your guns

    Now you're in the middle of 'No-mans-land'
    Who knows the way out of this fix?
    Of all the fame and glory they've promised
    But the stench burns your face, and it makes you feel sick

    You know that feeling you get
    when you're ready to regurgitate
    every little bit of your insides

    The way you know the world's gonna see
    everything you've kept from it
    and there's no safe place to hide

    That's it. You've done it.
    You came back with every finger
    with the exception of your right index finger and thumb
    That's what happens when you try to do death's job better
    You just try too hard for some teenaged boy with a gun

    Oh well, you're better off here anyway
    Reading papers on how the front row has a better view on the slaughter
    Why would you want to go back anyway?
    You're about to become a father
    telling stories even the wise could not tell
    Of a war in which every man could not fight to live
    but had to live to fight for himself
     
  2. Agent Sideburns

    Agent Sideburns brodo $waggins LPA Über VIP

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    Go ahead, touch the sun, kissing the horizon
    Just don't burn yourself when you cross the line
    C'mon kid, you'll be fine.
    Just don't forget to bring your guns

    Great stuff :)
     
  3. No Ace Just You

    No Ace Just You Well-Known Member

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    That is the best part indeed. Keep it up
     
  4. Jesse

    Jesse Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    I agree with the above post! Amazing work
     
  5. Speed Freak

    Speed Freak Well-Known Member

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    I love it dude!!!
     

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