To my dear friend "hate"

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  1. Il inno di morte

    Il inno di morte A noi si schiude il ciel...

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    To my dear friend "hate"

    You know who I am, you know me by name
    I've never seen your face,
    but I'll never stop feeling your hand on my shoulder.
    You were always by my side when I wanted to run away.

    Guilt and insecurity shielded you.
    Naivety and ignorance fed you.
    Tears and anger caressed you.
    Sadness and pain admired you.

    Master of fearful minds.
    Owner of the blood we spill all over a carpet of doubt.
    Creator of this monstrous and careless creature.
    Sickness that chokes all possible feelings.

    Sore stab that eats my soul 'til I'm barely human,
    I can't remember the first time I smelled your smile.
    But in this single letter, my friend,
    I just want to tell you how much I dread to know the main part of my spirit...


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    (dedicated to:
    D_A_V_I_D - my writing mate & buddy , to
    theazninvasion68- who always makes me laugh my ass off and to
    Coshe - the sweetest inspiration when it comes to love)


    I hope you guys enjoy it and tell me what you think about it :p
     
  2. Theazninvasion68

    Theazninvasion68 It's like blood to a vampire, our tragic desire. LPA Super VIP

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    lol thx

    thats really nice poem!
    kinda is what ive gone thur in october
     
  3. Coshe

    Coshe Member

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    Human emotions.. so complicated to explain, but surely u´ve found a way.thanks sparklin
     
  4. ahamLP

    ahamLP Well-Known Member

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    Cool,the more I read your stuff the more I am feeling that you are getting better by the day,but I am curious to know about that dedication,is it that those people inspired you to write the poem or its just a dedication to those people of a poem written before.
     
  5. D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Nice one. it was short but i didnt need to be any longer as you said what needed to be said. I LIKED IT. i especially liked the 2nd verse. keep it up.
     
  6. Muri

    Muri It never ends.

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    Wow. Me likey.
     
  7. MeLiS_

    MeLiS_ Well-Known Member

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    i like the main meaning.. ;) B)
     
  8. Il inno di morte

    Il inno di morte A noi si schiude il ciel...

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    well, about the dedication, those are people who are really close to me, and i decided to dedicate this poem to them. They kind of made it easier for inspiration to come, and i really appreciate it. thats why i mentioned those people. to let them now they're with me on every single line i write.
     

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