Stereotype II

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  1. Phantasm

    Phantasm Well-Known Member

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    "Stereotype II"

    Reach inside and pull out the embers
    Throw away my everything
    Reach down deep and feel the cinders
    Giving off their glow and heat
    A reminder of what I used to be

    You take it (everything)
    I take it (what do you want from me?)
    You faked it (and I'm left behind)
    Alone and naked I am blind
    I tell myself that I will see
    I tell myself that next time I will refuse to
    Believe

    Keeping my mouth shut
    I don't want you to scream at me
    Keeping my mind shut
    Because God forbid I should think
    Reach inside and take it apart (everything!)
    You've stilled the beating of my heart ( I guess I owe you everything!)

    Go ahead, take it (you know you're going to!)
    I'll take it (I have no choice left but to!)
    You faked it (I am left with nothing!)
    Cowering in my fear, I tell myself through my tears
    That I will see, that I will see, that I will see...
    I WILL REFUSE TO BELIEVE

    I CAN'T ACCEPT YOU
    I WON'T ACCEPT YOU
    I DENY YOU
    Take a good look at me and
    TELL ME IF YOU LIKE WHAT YOU'VE CREATED
    TELL ME IF IT FEELS GOOD TO MAKE ME HATE YOU
    TELL ME IF YOU GET A RUSH EVERY TIME I MAKE A CUT
    Nothing to show, spent and gone, so used up
    Next time I will refuse to believe...
     
  2. MeLiS_

    MeLiS_ Well-Known Member

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    1 word: WHOA..
     
  3. D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    definently this is REALLY REALLY GOOD, im speachless. THIS IS AWSOME ;) ummmmm keep writting cause i want to hear more. GREAT STUFF.
     
  4. fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    yeah this is quite powerful :eek:

    keep it up!
     
  5. notneo

    notneo Well-Known Member

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    Its great . Just like the others .
     
  6. Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    it's...it's beautiful..you got your word from David..it's got the enery to shake down my physics teacher..who is said to be unshakeable...


    i'm speechless...wordless...it's just too good for words...i live it too much!!!
     
  7. lp_sk8ergurl

    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

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    One of the best I've read yet.
     

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