Nothing I Can Do (In The Middle Of Nowhere)

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  1. El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Nothing I Can Do (In The Middle Of Nowhere)

    Standing all alone in the middle of nowhere
    Like a lightning rod on the top of the mountain
    Winds are blowing and breaking me
    Everyone has forsaken me
    There is nothing that
    Nothing that now I can do

    Burning in the sun in the middle of desert
    Like a grain of sand lonely lost forever
    Pain is growing inside of me
    Everyone has forgotten me
    There is nothing that
    Nothing that now I can do

    Running in the street in the middle of downfall
    Hanging off of a cliff and I’m ready to crumble
    Down below lies the dirt with my bones in it
    It’s never really been this hard for me to admit
    There is nothing that
    Nothing that now I can do
     
  2. D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    I like it ;)

    Really nice imagery, it flowed nicely and the poem overall was great, the only line that annoyed me slightly is
    It's not the greatest english and it seems out of place, unless you ment it to be like that. :mellow:
     
  3. El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Nothing in my lyrics is accidental. It's just the way I wanted it to be.

    It perfectly fits in with the melody I wrote it to. ;)

    Thanks for the comment anyway :D I appreciate it.
     

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