Lucky River

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  1. El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    I won't say what it's about, it would be really cool if someone guessed :)

    Lucky River

    In the field of green I stand
    With my future in my hands
    Breathing clouds as they breathe me
    And building towers in front of me

    Hand in hand they come outside
    All dressed in red, two girls, one guy
    I move my lips as if to ask
    But they won't tell me what comes next

    The highest tower I'd ever seen
    On the turn of the century
    Palace wouldn't go amiss
    I'm all inprepared for this

    Lucky river flows my way
    Lucky river saves the day
    Born with nothing
    I'll die with everything
     
  2. Luke

    Luke Mind Your Manners. LPA Addicted VIP

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    I dunno why but it kinda seems like it's about sex. :lol:

    Sorry if thats completely wrong. :lol:

    It's good nonetheless. :)
     
  3. El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    It's about something even better than sex! :lol:

    Thanks for the comment :)
     
  4. Arlene

    Arlene Oh what tangled webs we weave LPA Super Member

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    Better than sex?! Sounds fantastic. :lol:

    I do like it a lot though...but I'm not sure what it's referring to..
     
  5. Jesse

    Jesse Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    Is it about friends and frienship and the things that they give in life?
     
  6. El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Actually, it's about winning a game of poker. Texas hold'em. :)

    I guess I'll have to start explaining all the references and word plays now :lol:
     
  7. Luke

    Luke Mind Your Manners. LPA Addicted VIP

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    You think winning a game of poker is better than sex? What the hell dude? :lol:
     
  8. El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Haha I was just joking. :) But the feeling you get when you see the fifth card is the one you're expecting comes pretty close. At least on my scale :lol:
     
  9. Jesse

    Jesse Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    this is better than my lasted song.. DAMMIT!
     
  10. Will

    Will bread crumbs & white stones LPA Addicted VIP

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    At first I thought it was about the two chicks Eiffel Towering the dude. :lol:
     
  11. El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Haha you guys are great :D

    But that was I was actually trying to do, to completely hide the original meaning by using metaphors. I guess my mission is accomplished :)

    And for those who still can't make out any sense, green field = poker table, clouds = the cigarette smoke clouds, towers = little towers from chips, two girls and a guy = two queens and a jack, palace is a wordplay on Pallas, queen of spades' name, and turn and river are the names of the fourth and fifth card in texas holdem.
    (it's just now that I realize what a poker freak I am :lol:)

    And once again, thanks for all the comments :)
     
  12. Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    Nice one :lol:

    I was actually thinking of someone trying to start a new life and find new friends...
     
  13. El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Woah thats pretty cool how you wrote it. I got all the referances in the first paragraph but nothing after that.

    Btw that was after you said it was about poker.
     
  15. El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Thank you :)
     
  16. Arlene

    Arlene Oh what tangled webs we weave LPA Super Member

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    Haha, that's awesome! I love the play on words, it's imaginative and shows that you have talent, IMO. Great job.

    ...So winning poker is almost as great as sex..maybe I should play poker? :lol:
     
  17. El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Maybe you should try strip poker. A perfect combination. It almost always leads to sex and the game of poker with all the exicitement when you win a hand or two comes like foreplay :p

    And thank you very much for the comment :)
     
  18. Dedicated

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    It's very cleverly written. I like it.
     
  19. Jesse

    Jesse Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    nice metaphors, I want to eat them..
     

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