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  1. El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Leaving

    Leaves are falling on the ground
    As I’m walking the empty streets of my home town
    Where everybody used to know me
    And I used to know everyone
    I remember the day
    We went the separate ways
    To never see each other again
    To pursue our dreams
    We were too young to realize
    Now it’s too late to take it back

    The sky opens wide
    And the rain starts to fall
    I see your shattered smile in every single raindrop
    The echo of the wind sounds just like your voice
    The pavement is melting under my feet
    The ground is calling me
    The ground is swallowing me
    I scream your name
    Drowning in the river of memories
    My lungs are filled with you now
    I cannot breathe anymore

    And then I’m back into the reality
    The sun is high in the sky
    I see the happy couples walking hand in hand
    Familiar faces say hallo to me
    Back to my home town again
    Back home again
    I left and I regret
    I should have never left home
    I should have never left you
     
  2. Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Niiiiice.
     
  3. D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    I really liked this, but i don't think it's your best, you've written so many totally amazing things, that's it hard to remain at that level constantly.
     
  4. lp_sk8ergurl

    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

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    You have stolen my words.
     
  5. *MoOn*

    *MoOn* Well-Known Member

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    Wow... i just start to imagne when i read it :p ,really talented thing keep on that
     
  6. heshboy

    heshboy Well-Known Member

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    No one can ever steel these words, Nice, great job.
     

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