"Justify" (verse 1) I used to be euphoric Now I can't find nothin' for it I can't see my dreams It's not how it should be Everything's fallin' apart I need to get a new start (chorus) The weak live only to justify the strong Just as the Sun shines only to justify the darkness (verse 2) Time is countin' down I only hope I don't drown You've been pullin' me under You've found my one blunder Everything's fallin' apart I need to get a new start (chorus) The weak live only to justify the strong Just as the Sun shines only to justify the (bridge) Clock counts down to the end of the day It's constantly tickin' our life away There's nothin' we can do to stop it If only I could stop and drop it I'd change my life today And I'd find another way To deal with the pain I have inside If only.. if only I could fly (outro) The weak live to justify the strong Just as the Sun shines only to justify the Music plays only to justify the silence Just as Time clock ticks down to the end of the day The weak live only the justify the strong Just as the Sun shines only to Just as the Sun shines only to Just as the Sun shines only to justify the darkness
It sounds pretty cool. But I think the chorus seems too short. Other than that it seems like the lyrics flow pretty smooth.
yea but the beat is usually hard to find....... but the beat in this song is very easy to recognize.......
yea but the beat is usually hard to find....... but the beat in this song is very easy to recognize....... [/b][/quote] for beats you got to have alot of imagination like lp they dont have the same style as other rock bands their unique thats why they are the best!
well all I meant was the beat was very easy to recognize, I wasn't saying that it wasn't unique or anything.........
Damn you Will that's just classic. Like someone else said, you should work on the chorus a little bit-stretch it out a bit *shrugs* I wouldn't know...I'm only creative when it comes to drawing...not lyrics. Keep it up mate
are you, Derek and your friend still going to form a band? If you still are, is that gonna be one of your songs? that would be heaps cool if you did.
hmm yeah i like it!!! but one thing: i think u could add a few "minor" words to kinda make it flow better, so that one line isnt like really short, just add little words. u prolly dont get what i mean tho!! lol
I don't think you need to make the chorus longer. It all depends on how you sing it, I guess. The only part of the song I dislike is: No offense, but thats a rip from In The End. I love the rest of the song, and I'd love to see you put it into a song and play it. You might want to add a few more lines to the verses though. Just depends. The endings pretty long which is pretty damn cool. Good job, man. Write some more.
I took it from "In The End" on purpose. Most of the songs I write have a line from an LP song in them. They inspire me to write what I write.