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  1. Cassie

    Cassie The time to hesitate is through.

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    If

    If I had ever imagined,
    It would have come to this.
    I would freeze every memory,
    I would have saved each kiss.

    If had known before,
    That this might be the day.
    One inwhich the time seems like,
    It's left and gone away.

    If I had pretended,
    That this was all just a dream.
    It wouldn't have felt like we were,
    Breaking at the seam.

    If you hadn't been so stubborn,
    And me so scarred and weak.
    I wouldn't have to regret,
    All the things I had to speak.

    If I had a feeling,
    That this could start the end.
    I could never look at you,
    The same way once again.

    And now it hurts,
    Not to have you by my side.
    You're here/ Not next to me,
    Why do I always hide?

    I wrote this song last night, but it's actually about a situation I had to face in June this past year. As usual, please comment. Thanks ^_^
     
  2. Neil

    Neil Super Duper Member LPA Super Member

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    *tear*



    That's awesome! I remember when that happened, and it's the exact way I felt
     
  3. LornVourkolakas

    LornVourkolakas About To Blow Chunks

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    Great job. You have gone poem happy now. *gasp*
     
  4. Cassie

    Cassie The time to hesitate is through.

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    Lorn: *holds her breath* Poem happy? That's gree-e-at! ;)

    Neil: I'm glad my poem did us both some justice :)
     
  5. Hybrid Soldier

    Hybrid Soldier Y2K

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    you seem to be getting better at expressing yourself. :) nice poem.
     
  6. Cassie

    Cassie The time to hesitate is through.

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    Aaw, thanks for the compliment bud. Somedays I have to express myself in writing or drawing because the biggest mistake I could make would be to keep it bottled. :wth:
     
  7. Jamie

    Jamie Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Thats really good
     
  8. Cassie

    Cassie The time to hesitate is through.

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    Thanks Broken Fist ^_^
     

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