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  1. Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    Stifle you, oh king of the lost
    Hoping for amendments; Summon a creature called "artist"
    To heal the damage done,
    the plague on this house; Beware, here comes the arsonist

    Oh, Medusa, inside your lair,
    would you promise me my safe return?
    Would you keep me; beyond the Chimera's grasp,
    if I offered you my fur?

    Sadly,
    I have no posession, other than my scalp
    to offer, should you turn this offer down
    for I know, you fable, could care less for me,
    or I could not have wound up in a story so profound
     
  2. minuteforce

    minuteforce Danny's not here, Mrs. Torrance. LPA Team

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    :lol: Oh, that's good.
     
  3. Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    I sense sarcasm...
     
  4. minuteforce

    minuteforce Danny's not here, Mrs. Torrance. LPA Team

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    I thought it was good. :) The ending, I found anti-climatic, which is what I liked about it.
     

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