A Letter to my Love

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  1. esaul17

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    A Letter to my Love

    Dear Heartbreak,

    Do you know how many times I’ve wished to be near you?
    Talking to myself, wishing I could hear you
    Creating fictional conversations, all in my head
    Making up the word I know you’ve never said
    Never said to me at least, but I know you have to others
    Now whenever you’re gone I feel my heart smothers
    And that is a lot, for you have no reason to see me
    But if that is true, do I have a reason to be me?
    I act differently around you, but I’m still being myself
    I’m just happy when I’m around you, there’s really nothing else
    And no one else that makes me feel as I do with you
    But each word you say makes me cry, makes me lie, and breaks my heart in two
    I know you cannot realize how you make me feel
    Even to me this pain seems so surreal
    Like something so hurtful can really exist
    But the sight of your face proves me wrong like a blow from your fist
    “I love you, I love you, I love you,” I whisper when alone
    “I need you, I need you I need you,” I want you for my own
    But if I told you this, how little would you care?
    Would you laugh right in my face? Or would you stop and stare?
    I try again and again, wishing to know the answer
    Curiosity and wishfully thinking spreading like a cancer
    Maybe if keep lying I can pretend you feel the same way
    But I’ll have to keep crying, I know what you’d say
    The truth would ruin our friendship, such a loss and I’d have no gain
    Because even though the thought of you causes so much pain
    If I had to go from now back to then
    I would choose to torture myself and do it all again
     
  2. GrafiTTied

    GrafiTTied Well-Known Member

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    And thats why your the best lyricist on LPA........................
     
  3. esaul17

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    Thanks lol.
     
  4. mathew51b

    mathew51b Well-Known Member

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    wow that is seriously good. well done, im gonna find some more of your stuff
     
  5. esaul17

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    Thanks. My website is esaul17.sitesled.com, and has all my stuff except the piece that won the Writers Competition.
     
  6. mathew51b

    mathew51b Well-Known Member

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    just went on your site and read one poem, it is seriously good. ive put it in my favourites and im gonna read some more after i done my english coursework.
     
  7. esaul17

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    Thanks a lot. What poem did you read? And if you want to comment on any stuff there, you can email me at esaul17@gmail.com. I'd love to hear your feedback.
     

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