A.06

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by From The Inside, Apr 17, 2003.

  1. Sick of being dragged behind,
    With nothing but an empty mind,
    But at a time in life it was filled with hopeful lines.
    You took all that was mine,
    Made it ugly and filled with lies.
    I can't believe I didn't see the evilness inside your eyes

    I won't run and hide.
    Today I crawl out from behind.
    No more fights; you've put me down and lied for the last time.
    So today I rise.
    The dust is clear, I see the skies.
    I can't forgive for what is done and can't put it all behind.


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    Yeah, you obviously have to have A.06 to flow to this. Feedback, anyone?
     
  2. Happy Gilmore

    Happy Gilmore Y2K

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    It's kind of difficult?! :wacko: [for me] I donnow where to start the lyrics and with that temp to keep them up....

    [Edit]:But the lyrics are cool ^_^
     
  3. Neil

    Neil Super Duper Member LPA Super Member

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    If I get around to it, (and can edit my voiceto make it sound 'good' :p) I might put vocals to a.06and post it
     
  4. LPNargiZ

    LPNargiZ Member

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    not bad not bad... ;)
     
  5. Pinkin Lark

    Pinkin Lark Prince of Persia.

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    not bad...
     
  6. Tim2

    Tim2 Ambient

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    I actually like the lyrics alot but I'd rather see you transform them into a full length song rather than just off A.06.
     
  7. Thanks so much for the feedback, guys. *bump* :D
     
  8. Shinji

    Shinji Illuminate

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    it's good
     
  9. [Darken Hybrid]

    [Darken Hybrid] Ambient

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    It's great. the only thing wrong is that your voice needs to be higher or the instrumental needs to be just a little bit lower. other than that is great.
     

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